Nightmare Beach

Rated 3.50/5 based on 6 reviews
A flash fiction piece about a romantic night on the beach that takes an unexpected turn.
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About Michael J Crow

I've been writing for about 20 years (sort of) after starting as a teen. I love horror fiction including Brian Keene,Jack Ketchum, Stephen King and Clive Barker.

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Reviews

Gavin Murphy reviewed on Oct. 20, 2013

It was a bit short but still quite good. The writing was good though the plot was basic.
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Michener 78 reviewed on April 4, 2013

VERY brief! Unexpected and good.
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Walter Lazo reviewed on June 25, 2012

Far too many commas are missing where they are clearly necessary; the story, however, is effective.
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brian fang reviewed on June 2, 2010

wow, definitely didn't see that coming! short!short!short!what can i say? write more next time
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FauxPaw reviewed on March 15, 2010

Even in the world of short stories, this is a quickie. In the couple of minutes it takes to read it's quite descriptive. Was this just a writing exercise? Why not write a full length book, or even a full length short story, Michael? Or have you? ...Off to check out what else you've written in case I'd be interested.

I'd have given it 4 stars if it had been longer. Doesn't seem fair, does it? Let's call it my own inadequacy that I can't judge a story that's /this/ short.

One last thought --I guess this story did it's job after all if I'm going to check out more.

Ok, one really last thought --this review may be longer than your story. :)
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visionchild reviewed on March 2, 2010

I was browsing through some short stories to read on my lunch break and this was the one I chose. I'm a big fan of horror stories and even though this probably wasn't meant to be humerous, I laughed my a-- off! Talk about getting right to the point. Maybe I just don't understand the meanings behind short stories, it's not a bad thing, I guess I'm just not educated enough in that type of literature. However, I read books to be entertained, and this story definitely entertained me, even if it was for 48 seconds. Nice work, Michael! --- 5 stars from me!
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Joey Jones reviewed on Feb. 9, 2010
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good short michael. i was suprised to see you are from sw minnesota. i myself am from sw minnesota. small world.
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