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6/24/2012 Revision Notes

This revision has replaced some whiches with thats and has removed a comma before an ellipses to satisfy some grammar purists. It isn’t always the case that common usage becomes proper grammar after some period of time but frequently it does. Perhaps I didn’t wait long enough or was overzealous in reducing my use of the word that.

1/20/2012 Revision Notes

Some corrections thanks to David King. Improved some formatting and changed to three dot ellipses without internal spaces but a before and after space because it looks cleaner.


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