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Member Since: Jan. 29, 2016

ANTIcarrot

D.B. Story

Farleven

Latest book: Ravishing the Star Princess - Part 6 – Restoring the Queen.
Published February 19, 2024.

Getting Some Tail - An Erotic Transformation Adventure on Feb. 07, 2016

Well this was disappointing. I know that Farlavan has rewritten a lot of his work, but this time making Patricia so agreeable sucked a lot of tension out of the story. The rewrite also feels very sloppy once her transformation has completed. The author seems to forget that she's not stuck in a cage in this version, and for some reason suddenly switches back to the 'sex slave' narrative when 'kinky girlfriend' would be a much better fit for the majority of this revision. In either the original (track it down if you can) or a properly revised version, this would easily be 4 stars. This half way house though is 2 stars at best.
Debbie’s Conversion into a Fuck Slut on Dec. 05, 2016

Brought this before seeing it was less than 3k words in length. There is barely a scene here, much less a complete story. It's not bad as such, but reads like an animated gif of a famous moment from a film, with everything else before and after missing. And I'm really not sure that's value for money.