Valentine's Candy was a nice short story. I like stories about holidays! Thanks for making this one free. However, despite it being a short story, I felt a bit more detail could have been used. What did Candy or Kevin look like? What about Candy's house? Did Candy live in the city or in the country? I think details like this would've made the story more complete. Also, there were a few grammatical errors. Lots of people confuse the meanings of "then" and "than". Otherwise, a fun, spooky read! Thanks again and best of luck with your writing!