Firstly, I must disagree with AccelW, who by the way has NOT PUBLISHED A THING HIMSELF. You sir are a troll, write something better then you can judge all you want. This story is nothing fantastic I'll admit but it's worth more than 1 star. I give it 3 stars because I like the virtual reality angle. I DO THINK it is IMAGINATIVE much moreso than all the shitty 'billionaire erotica' that is infesting Smashwords and the internet these days since 50 SHADES came out. I like Brianna's other stuff too. What's worth 1 STAR you ask? Anything by Ernest Winchester. NOW THAT GUY SUCKS!
I think everyone has had the kind of feelings Mike has in the story. Frustration, anger, going crazy and feeling like the world around you is completely out of control. And it's that shared experience that makes it resonate so much stronger... the humor also helps a lot.
There's just something sexy and hot about women in uniform getting down and dirty with each other. All sorts of fantasies come to mind, cops and robbers hehe, cops and prisoners and in this case 2 cops enjoying each other's bodies. This was sexy as fuck.