Firstly, I must disagree with AccelW, who by the way has NOT PUBLISHED A THING HIMSELF. You sir are a troll, write something better then you can judge all you want. This story is nothing fantastic I'll admit but it's worth more than 1 star. I give it 3 stars because I like the virtual reality angle. I DO THINK it is IMAGINATIVE much moreso than all the shitty 'billionaire erotica' that is infesting Smashwords and the internet these days since 50 SHADES came out. I like Brianna's other stuff too. What's worth 1 STAR you ask? Anything by Ernest Winchester. NOW THAT GUY SUCKS!