Daddy Knows (Stepfather/daughter Erotica)
on Nov. 28, 2012
Wish there was a backstory. I liked the forbidden aspect. Stepfather/Stepdaughter. So it's really not incest. The sex was really hot. Like I said would have preferred if it was a longer story. And of course more of the steamy sex.
Hot sex scenes. The alpha male was indeed a flawed character. But aren't we all. Could have been written better. The female lead could have been written to have a stronger moral fiber. Considering how she was raised she dropped them pretty quick. Liked that the author wrote from both perspectives though.
Hot short read. Very well written. I was pleasantly surprised.
The Beast's Virgin Offering (Dark Forest Mating Part 1)
on Feb. 09, 2013
Interesting opening to the story. Could have used more of there connection though. It was very well thought out. Really should have finished though. Enjoyed the bdsm aspect of the story. The sex was hot.
Starts out with him denying what he feels, when he sees his stepdaughter. Fantasies starts and get the better of him. Then when he can't hold any longer he cats on them. He begins to touch her while she is asleep. Then he begins to have sex with her. That's coercion. It's hot. Would have loved more scenes though. But good.
This was a hot read. Brother doing his sister an falling in love with her. Then brother and sister doing their mother. Then he also falling in love with her. Then them also including the husband (daddy). Was hot.
I really enjoyed this book. Their relationship wasn't rushed like other short stories. Granted it was 41 pages in the PDF. But still a very good story.
The buildup from normal employer/employee to the close friendship. Then to the inevitable lovers. this slow rise allowed these people to really get to know one another. The intensity of their union was really good. The heat was so scorching that I had to go take a very cold shower.
I loved that Martha was independent. Was not your typical slim, thin or skinny woman. Like so may romance novels out there. I mean come on! Do I really need to settle for the constsnt bombardment from the tv and media and other magazines that curves are horrendous? That having a more than a size zero body in clothes is a crime? She was a regular sized twelve woman. I lied that! Sure she has her doubtful moments but then again so do we all. I also loved that the hero, Phillip loves is not your typical guy. He is virile. He is looking for more than a one night stand. Thumbs up for this writter. For going against the established. Kudos.
Enjoyed this read. It started out as a nefarious plan to give him what he wanted which was a child. But she was very out there. She wound up seducing him. I liked that. She surprised him. He liked that too. I really liked that their relationship deepens. their scences together were very hot. I really loved that.
I like this short introduction. From the bitch of a mother to his Clark Kentish busines partner. That's been crushing on her. To the jealous planner that has a crush on both. I look forward to more. I also liked the curvaceous lingerie. It's about time a story had a curvaceous theme mixed in with the modeling.
Ms. Or Mrs. Baker didn't disappoint. This book was written very well. No complaints whatsoever. However i have an issue with Jason. He shouldn't have been with her mother like that. It was gross. Especially after what happened between them. That was hot.
Hot. That's all I can say. I would have given this a five star rating if it was longer. And they fell in love, but that was the plan. She wanted to loose her cherry. At least it was an unforgettable first time.
Good story. But I would have loved another deeper connection. A deeper love connection between the two. Was a dirty raunchy sex episode. And if he or someone I lived with ever did what he did prior. I would have done worse. I would make him pay. Dearly.
Definatly not for the faint hearted. Very dirty and very raunchy. Love the twist on the whole purity ball thing. Filled with grandfathers, fathers, and uncles doing the nasty with thier no longer virgin daughters
Stepdad, Teach Me about Sex
on Aug. 12, 2015
I have read better in this genre. I wish I didn't read this one. He spends all of this time telling her this thing is not appropriate. They passed appropriate already why not just go all the way.
on Aug. 12, 2015
I've read thus story in Literotica.
Not bad. Told from her point of view. Of what is essentially a one night stand with her previously unrequited love. But as they say she makes a decision and ends their ties. Making me like her. She has a backbone.
Great storytelling. I loved their connection. I loved that she wasn't a meek girl. I loved the shot action between the sheets. I didn't like that he was a player. He matched the others in getting and banging the females.
Very hot series. But what bothered me was the mother was still in the picture. What would have been better was that she wasn't. I don't care if it's by death or mutual agreement or divorce. Just as long as their was no cheating. And also there were no real deep feelings just lust and desire.
I like the premise of the story. I love the idea if getting revenge for the affair that was two months. And that it was to handcuff him and have him watch as she revenged screwed fucked her ex which surprisingly enough his older brother. Who had a big... But I wanted more of a connection between them. Not just that. And what about the ending. Is there to be more to his cheating ways?
Very hot story. I loved how it didn't dive straightaway into sex. I also loved the unconventional typical skinny stick thin white female lead. I loved the hot white male as well. I also loved the writing.
I loved this story. But there was a part that i didn't like. It was him referring to himself that what he was feeling he thought was simple lust. It's just one time that he mentioned it but still, it implies that he lied to her by telling her that he loved her.
I liked this story. I loved that both stepfather and stepdaughter had a genuine connection. I would have live to hear if the relationship for the future moved further. Did she conceive? Did they marry? Has his ex and her mother find out about them? So many questions.
Great beginning. It truly was a hot first encounter. I would most definitely read if the author decides to write about these two people who really do have a sizzling hot explosive chemistry. I would have loved if he found them in the act. But thinking better this story could be stretched out to include marriage. Make the hot daddy and the girl really fall in love.
Not a bad story. The stepdaughter sounds like a little girl though. She needed to be more mature. Would have loved to read what the stepdaddy thought. What he felt. And the cheating mother. What happens to her?
Mainly one big church orgy. As the title says. But I would have loved more focus on the Daddy and daughter. It is their story after all. Even though the last 2 pages focuses on them. I want more of them.
Good first time sex between stepddady and stepdaughter. They are more like friends though. There is no emotional connection between the two. It is more like, him helping her out to get her first time over with. It was hot though...
Good story. But it was too quick. There was no real build up or teasing between daddy and daughter. If it was me. I would have played it out. Make the father and stepmother suffer. It really is her due.
The swingers and other women took away the enjoyment for me. I would have loved this title to just have the ex stepdaddy with the ex stepdaughter. The sex with them, when it's just them is hot. But no real emotional connection. Even though it was written well.