Please Daddy
on June 20, 2017
Desperately needs an editor. Spelling errors, weird sentences and a plot that is all over the place. The idea is hot, the execution isn't.
Daddy Needs To Fuck Another Slutty Daughter
on Nov. 22, 2017
I like the idea a lot. But the dialogue feels forced, rushed. Not just that, this might be the shortest 3 dollar story ever. Very disappointed with the length. I've read some of Farleven's older free stories, for example 'My New Position' and those were incredible. Long, detailed and hot. This... this wasn't. This feels like the first piece of a new author, not something written by a former master of erotica. Hope Farleven takes this idea and really runs with it, make it into something good that I can recommend.