Brad Stuff X

Smashwords book reviews by Brad Stuff X

  • Britney's Peers on July 17, 2011

    Other than the pun in the title, totally mediocre. Britney is unrealistic, and her peers more so.
  • Excerpts from a Sex Slave's Diary on Dec. 11, 2011

    Well written, and super-hot. On my third rerading.
  • A Chain of Mothers; Erotic Tales of Incest on Jan. 03, 2012

    Esmerelda has a dirty, raunchy mind. If it's sexy, taboo, and filthy, she's there. This collection is some of her better work -- Well-written and HOT. I love you, Esmerelda!
  • Kinked Sober: An Erotic BDSM Novel of Recovery on Feb. 07, 2012

    Gawd, this drags. Keeps sounding like it's going to be hot, but qhwn?
  • Breaking In on Feb. 29, 2012

    Poorly written, unrealisticc, and not believable. He does nothing special ang she caves, badly.
  • Fucked by my daughter's boyfriend on June 15, 2012

    Grammar and spelling are so awful that it is impossible to read.
  • An Indian Slave Capture and Breaking on July 15, 2012

    So full of wrong words, its unreadable. Seems, someone did a spell-check and just took the first choice. Besides that, totally unrealistic.
  • Chains on July 24, 2012

    Great! Well written and amusing. A touch more predictable than it might have been, but fun anyway.
  • Brittany's Lusts on Sep. 27, 2012

    Well written, well edited (a rarity in this genre), and so raunchy it's breathtaking. Definitely one for re-reading!
  • Brittany's Beau on Sep. 27, 2012

    Poor Brittany! one little misadventure with Beauregard, and she's on on a fast slide dowwn, into -- everything. Raunchy and explicit; a great read (if you like it over the top)! Very well written. Get the sequel at the same time.
  • Jillian's Secret on Sep. 27, 2012

    Hot read. Well written. (Nicole's later works are better proofed.) Nicole has a disgusting, dirty, raunchy gutter-mind. I love you, girl!
  • Arousing Amelia on Nov. 04, 2012

    Well written and hot! That there was a twist at the end was predictable, I expected it, and was totally surprised that it wasn't the one I expected. Well done!
  • Kendra 2.5: Kendra, Greg and Alan on Nov. 04, 2012

    Much too "menu", wihout the passion: "She then pulled out of... Kendra then positioned herself... Alan then lifted his... Kendra then took the dildo out of...
  • In Training on Jan. 13, 2013

    A really good read. Romantic and Hot -- emphasis on the first. It's in my reread list.
  • Layla's Lust on April 17, 2013

    Opinions vary! I loved it. You write well - so hot!
  • The Ride Home (The Babysitter #1) on Feb. 02, 2014

    I felt like I was left hanging, and not in a good way. Decent writing, though.
  • The Barbie Lez Collection: Bestiality Edition on Feb. 22, 2014

    Bad writing. Bad anatomy. Bad editing.
  • Panty Thief: Mom Catches Daughter #1 on Feb. 23, 2014

    OMG! OMFG! Please keep writing.
  • Ashley's Ass on April 10, 2014

    Typical (?) Nicole, worth reading. This one is nothing special.
  • Jillian's Bitch on April 10, 2014

    Wow Nicole, this one's hot hot hot. Well written and well-paced. Read it!
  • The Dog Upstairs; A Short Story of Bestiality on April 27, 2014

    Marry me, Esmeralda, please. You write so well, describe believably, and add humor to unmatched eroticism. This is my favorite reread of all.
  • Mom and Muttly; A Short Story of Incest and Bestiality on April 27, 2014

    Another great reread; so much taboo, humor, and eroticism in such a small package. Ms Greene, you are far and away the best.
  • Jennifer's Secrete on June 01, 2014

    Bad grammar destroys the mediocre writing. "as they peaked above the dress..." "to test her knew plot tonight, she..." "she'd right down every moment." Even the title is off. I expected to read about powerful secretions... Marisol, take some English courses, or fire your proof reader.
  • Birthday Surprise Part 1: A FREE Erotic Adventure on June 01, 2014

    OK - mediocre, both the writing and the heat.
  • Painting on Nov. 20, 2014

    Not really a story, more like a word painting. This is really great!
  • Three More Wishes: Be Kind To Your Genie on Feb. 01, 2015

    Romantic and sexy. I loved it. Confused, though -- is this written for men or for women? -- Women are getting most of the orgasms, but protagonist is male. Warning: Male protagonist builds a "harem" - might offend some.
  • The Teacher's Pets / My Erotic Canine Education! (Taboo Dog Erotica) on Feb. 02, 2015

    Well written and Raunchy. But, if you are buying books with this topic, I'm pretty sure you'll like it.
  • The Babe Bike Blues on Feb. 16, 2015

    On my fourth (not last) read! Romantic! Sexy! Yeah, miracle cures are improbable, but so what! Characters have depth enough to really involve you.
  • Campground Awakening on Feb. 19, 2015

    Just Great! Sweet romance with lots of sex. A coming-of-age story with twists. The author's writing style and clean prose flow well and help you get involved with the characters.
  • A Priestly Seduction on March 08, 2015

    Spelling errors on the sales blurb turn me off to the whole story.
  • From Slave Too Empress on March 08, 2015

    Wrong words and spelling errors everywhere, even in the title. Prose is stilted and awkward. Plot is nonexistent. Eroticism is nonexistent. This is not an author to choose.
  • Making the MILF List-Episodes 1 & 2: Making MILF #1 on July 29, 2015

    Great Read, and very HOT. characters have personality, actions make sense, and situations are "realistic enough". Really good writing style, and not full of the errors caused by sloppy proofing. I'm going back for more by this author -- probably a lot more.
  • Making the MILF LIst-Episode 3: A Blond and Mom on Aug. 06, 2015

    Wow, better than the first! Really well written, and well-developed, though implausible, characters. But implausible isn't new to erotic romance, nor to fiction in general. This is hot stuff, but if you like the genre, then a definite "Yes".
  • Making the MILF LIst-Episode 4: A Black MILF and More on Aug. 06, 2015

    Another great read! Medium ranks up there with Esmeralda Greene - no better praise! A just bought the rest of this series and all of the next. Thank you Medium!
  • Making the MILF LIst-Episode 5: The Last MILF and More on Aug. 07, 2015

    Wow! Consistently high quality, all four books in the series. This is a very raunchy book; read it for that. But it's more than that. The characters are all well developed (pun not intended, but true), and all people I'd (you'd) like to spend time with. Written effectively in the first person, we follow the emotional growth of the narrator. Situations are a little staged, but all fiction is like that.
  • The Arrangement on Aug. 13, 2015

    JJ writes well! This is one of the author's better works. If you're into light bondage (not my thing usually, but...), then by all means, jump in. The heroine is likable, the protagonist (emphasis on "agonist" admirable) and the sex hot. Hard to believe a woman could orgasm that much.
  • Sharing the MILF List-Episode #1: Practicing Sharing the MILF LIst on Sep. 03, 2015

    We start to see Sonny struggle with doubts, while continuing to charge ahead with the plan, trying to keep to it while improvising as circumstances develop. Still very well written and very hot. No fading on a great record. I'll skarf up all the rest as they appear.
  • Woman On Top on Nov. 16, 2015

    Very well written, hot, but not quite kinky enough. Also, it is well-proof-read. I hate the distraction of bad proofing. I am buying the whole collection; these free starters (teasers) are a great introduction to a writer's style.
  • I is for Insatiable on Dec. 01, 2015

    This is the hottest, dirtiest, loving erotica I have ever read. A young woman gets pulled (leaps enthusiastically) into the world of filthy family love. She tells the story. This definitely demands sequels.
  • Vacation at Auntie's; A Short Story of Incest on Dec. 07, 2015

    Ms Greene's work is always worthwhile! This is not her best, but still far better than most other erotica authors. This one contains kinky whole-family loving incest stuff, with a nice twist at the end -- definitely worth a read and a re-read. If you read this and don't know Ms Greene's other work, you might find it difficult to believe that this is not her best. Starting here could be your best plan, as things will start great and just get better.
  • Seducing My Kinky Stepdad on Jan. 31, 2016

    Pretty decently written, but so poorly edited that it's distracting!
  • Mom Will Do Anything...Even Her Son on Feb. 14, 2016

    Tedious! Not that a slow buildup is bad -- just that this one dragged. So,read first 20%, skip to 50%, and read from there.
  • Busty Randy: Daddy's Special Girl on March 21, 2016

    Other than not appreciating the author scolding the reader ìn the intro, and being annoyed by the constantly changing text size (one paragraph too small for comfortable reading and the next much too large), the sex was hot, but drugged slavery is not my thing, and was not in the teaser. Rated a pass!
  • Katie on April 10, 2016

    At first, I thought it a hot read, but, by 1/8 of the way through, the repetitious references to heat got tedious: hot pussy, burning me, too hot, super heated (sic), and on and on and ... There are other things a pussy can feel like, most better than just heat: squeezing, milking, like a gloved hand, and other things to describe. This one's a miss.
  • His Personal Call Girl: The Complete Series on June 08, 2016

    A well-written,, filthy romance. I loved it!
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #10: A Mother and Daughter Extension on July 10, 2016

    It is strange to watch Sonny grow. This is supposed to be erotic, and it is (very), but it's more. We watch him struggling and growing, as his seduction skills complicate a life that includes school, family, and a serious desire to keep each woman in his life happy. Still, it's mostly about good sex. You can tell it is written for men, but the women get most of the orgasms. Seems totally unrealistic, except that I knew a guy like Sonny, many years ago in college.
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #4: A Wife and a Mistress, It's Only Business on July 10, 2016

    Wow. Always expecting Sonny's past (loves? conquests? FWBs? ...) to overwhelm, but Sonny - actually, Mr. McKlusky - keeps it going in a positive way. The man really loves women - both men do. Medium, please write more of this series, it is not getting stale. and write FASTER!
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #5: Sister Act Twice, New Year's Sisters on July 10, 2016

    Same constantly great quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot enconters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale.
  • Extending the MILF LIst-Episode #6: A Sister, a Schizo, a Stranger and a Savant on July 10, 2016

    Same constantly great quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot enconters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale.
  • Extending the MILF LIst-Episode #7: Step 1: Lineup 1 Redhead, Doubleteam 1 Blonde Aunt on July 10, 2016

    Same constantly great quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot encounters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale, especially new and unexpected interactions among the women.
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #8: The Skeptical Ex and an Office Affair on July 10, 2016

    Wow! Sonny is required to put up - to put on a demonstration. Though concerned and nervous, he handles it in his own style. None of this is believable, except that the author pulls us in and makes it believable.
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #9: Collaring the MILFs on July 10, 2016

    Every book in the series is great: the same constantly high quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot encounters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale.
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #11: Beginning a Mother-Daughter Drama on July 10, 2016

    Sonny's continuing frustrations with double-D's teasing antics seem to be coming to head. In this episode, everything explodes. When it's crunch time and things look bleak, Sonny's back-up persona of total openness and honesty carries him through, and gets him laid some more, of course.
  • My Best Friend My Mom His Mom and Her Dog on Aug. 22, 2016

    Awful writing, bad grammar, missing words, run-on sentences, sloppy reuse of words, and incorrect, misleading punctuation all result in total distraction from the story. Seemed like the plot-line could have made a good read, but was told so simplistically as to be unbelievable. One more author for my "never read" list.
  • Extending the MILF List-Episode #13: How Much Sex Can One Man Have? Freaky Friday on Aug. 23, 2016

    The whole series is enthralling, and this volume is no exception. Clearly written for men, but it is the women who get most of the orgasms. Clearly, the protagonist loves women, not just sex with women, and, just as clearly, so does the author. Medium, please write more! Please write faster! Feed my addiction!
  • All in the Family, my Wife and my Father on Aug. 27, 2016

    This could have been a really good read, but the editing issues (particularly the missing words) make it too jarring to flow reasonably. I found myself rereading a sentence or paragraph several times, trying to figure out what the author was saying. I gave up half way through.
  • The Triple Erotica Collection: Volume 7 on Sep. 07, 2016

    Barbie needs a proof-reader. Sexxi needs better pacing - draggy start. Lexington is just right.
  • Saving Mouse on Sep. 10, 2016

    Oh, my! Such a good story. I'm half in love with Mouse already. The writing flows well, pulls the reader in, and makes the plot come alive. And, besides, the sex is hot and loving. I'n reading the second now, an cannot wait for more.
  • Mom Has Fantasies, Too! on Sep. 25, 2016

    He's sitting back . Her pussy is grinding on his knee. Her nipple is in his mouth and her face is buried in his neck. This impossible position totally destroys the image that took ten pages to build. Remainder is "same-old", unremarkable sex scenes. Laura, you've done much better than this.
  • The Prude on Nov. 12, 2017

    Slow and awful, but got a bit better at the end. Using a hyphen with no spaces in place of a dash was terribly distracting. Each time, reading flow stopped till I could reinterpret from a hyphenated word to a dash punctuation. Skip this author, until she grows up.