Smokin' hot fantasy. Would like to be fully human but part cat? Marred, as so many ar, by bad proofing (grammar, spelling.
Celeste, "alright" is not a word, it is always "all right".
"already" is a word, meaning done, history.
"all ready" means everyone prepared.
Also, I think that other word is spelled "douche".
Poor Brittany! one little misadventure with Beauregard, and she's on on a fast slide dowwn, into -- everything.
Raunchy and explicit; a great read (if you like it over the top)! Very well written. Get the sequel at the same time.
Bad grammar destroys the mediocre writing.
"as they peaked above the dress..."
"to test her knew plot tonight, she..."
"she'd right down every moment."
Even the title is off. I expected to read about powerful secretions...
Marisol, take some English courses, or fire your proof reader.
Romantic and sexy. I loved it.
Confused, though -- is this written for men or for women?
-- Women are getting most of the orgasms, but protagonist is male.
Warning: Male protagonist builds a "harem" - might offend some.
Just awful. Erotic, but the really bad writing and bad grammar makes it too difficult to read. Additionally, the use of language is childish -- "shitter" is not an erotic name for that part of the anatomy. Any plot that exists is ruined by internal timing conflicts and other faults. I added this author to my "never read again" list.
Other than that, ...
Great Read, and very HOT. characters have personality, actions make sense, and situations are "realistic enough".
Really good writing style, and not full of the errors caused by sloppy proofing.
I'm going back for more by this author -- probably a lot more.
Wow, better than the first! Really well written, and well-developed, though implausible, characters. But implausible isn't new to erotic romance, nor to fiction in general.
This is hot stuff, but if you like the genre, then a definite "Yes".
Wow! Consistently high quality, all four books in the series.
This is a very raunchy book; read it for that.
But it's more than that. The characters are all well developed (pun not intended, but true), and all people I'd (you'd) like to spend time with. Written effectively in the first person, we follow the emotional growth of the narrator. Situations are a little staged, but all fiction is like that.
JJ writes well! This is one of the author's better works.
If you're into light bondage (not my thing usually, but...), then by all means, jump in. The heroine is likable, the protagonist (emphasis on "agonist" admirable) and the sex hot. Hard to believe a woman could orgasm that much.
Nice little story, The "heroine" is sweet and loving, and seems to love being raunchy.
But, Candice, a nock is the piece on an arrow that the bowstring goes into. A knock is the sound of nuckles (sic) tapping on a door, table, or such.
We start to see Sonny struggle with doubts, while continuing to charge ahead with the plan, trying to keep to it while improvising as circumstances develop. Still very well written and very hot. No fading on a great record. I'll skarf up all the rest as they appear.
Very well written, hot, but not quite kinky enough. Also, it is well-proof-read. I hate the distraction of bad proofing.
I am buying the whole collection; these free starters (teasers) are a great introduction to a writer's style.
This is the hottest, dirtiest, loving erotica I have ever read. A young woman gets pulled (leaps enthusiastically) into the world of filthy family love. She tells the story.
This definitely demands sequels.
Ms Greene's work is always worthwhile! This is not her best, but still far better than most other erotica authors.
This one contains kinky whole-family loving incest stuff, with a nice twist at the end -- definitely worth a read and a re-read.
If you read this and don't know Ms Greene's other work, you might find it difficult to believe that this is not her best. Starting here could be your best plan, as things will start great and just get better.
Really terrible writing. The very first sentence made no sense, and it did not get better: "Abby whistled her favorite song as she cooked Eric his favorite things had been awkward since the submarine.".
Other than not appreciating the author scolding the reader ìn the intro, and being annoyed by the constantly changing text size (one paragraph too small for comfortable reading and the next much too large), the sex was hot, but drugged slavery is not my thing, and was not in the teaser. Rated a pass!
Well-written and hot! Ms Zahara can definitely turn a story.
Our protagonist is seduced and hired by the Minister, and in total lust in this office+ affair, only to be passed on,surprised and wealthier, to ...
At first, I thought it a hot read, but, by 1/8 of the way through, the repetitious references to heat got tedious: hot pussy, burning me, too hot, super heated (sic), and on and on and ...
There are other things a pussy can feel like, most better than just heat: squeezing, milking, like a gloved hand, and other things to describe.
This one's a miss.
It is strange to watch Sonny grow. This is supposed to be erotic, and it is (very), but it's more. We watch him struggling and growing, as his seduction skills complicate a life that includes school, family, and a serious desire to keep each woman in his life happy. Still, it's mostly about good sex. You can tell it is written for men, but the women get most of the orgasms.
Seems totally unrealistic, except that I knew a guy like Sonny, many years ago in college.
Wow. Always expecting Sonny's past (loves? conquests? FWBs? ...) to overwhelm, but Sonny - actually, Mr. McKlusky - keeps it going in a positive way. The man really loves women - both men do.
Medium, please write more of this series, it is not getting stale. and write FASTER!
Same constantly great quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot encounters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale, especially new and unexpected interactions among the women.
Wow! Sonny is required to put up - to put on a demonstration. Though concerned and nervous, he handles it in his own style. None of this is believable, except that the author pulls us in and makes it believable.
Every book in the series is great: the same constantly high quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot encounters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale.
Sonny's continuing frustrations with double-D's teasing antics seem to be coming to head. In this episode, everything explodes.
When it's crunch time and things look bleak, Sonny's back-up persona of total openness and honesty carries him through, and gets him laid some more, of course.
Sometimes that grammar and spelling are so bad it's not worth wading through. This is one instance!
In the first paragraph:
"wanked my huge dick in blurry furry!"
"caught myself on numerous occasions, starring at her"
Awful writing, bad grammar, missing words, run-on sentences, sloppy reuse of words, and incorrect, misleading punctuation all result in total distraction from the story.
Seemed like the plot-line could have made a good read, but was told so simplistically as to be unbelievable.
One more author for my "never read" list.
The whole series is enthralling, and this volume is no exception. Clearly written for men, but it is the women who get most of the orgasms. Clearly, the protagonist loves women, not just sex with women, and, just as clearly, so does the author.
Medium, please write more! Please write faster! Feed my addiction!
This could have been a really good read, but the editing issues (particularly the missing words) make it too jarring to flow reasonably. I found myself rereading a sentence or paragraph several times, trying to figure out what the author was saying. I gave up half way through.
This author needs a couple semesters of grammar lessons, and then two of sentence structure. Perhaps a good proof-reader could solve these.
The prose is just too error-filled to be enjoyable.
This author goes to my "never read" list.
Oh, my! Such a good story. I'm half in love with Mouse already.
The writing flows well, pulls the reader in, and makes the plot come alive.
And, besides, the sex is hot and loving.
I'n reading the second now, an cannot wait for more.
He's sitting back . Her pussy is grinding on his knee. Her nipple is in his mouth and her face is buried in his neck.
This impossible position totally destroys the image that took ten pages to build.
Remainder is "same-old", unremarkable sex scenes.
Laura, you've done much better than this.