A Chain of Mothers; Erotic Tales of Incest
on Jan. 03, 2012
Esmerelda has a dirty, raunchy mind. If it's sexy, taboo, and filthy, she's there. This collection is some of her better work -- Well-written and HOT.
I love you, Esmerelda!
An Indian Slave Capture and Breaking
on July 15, 2012
So full of wrong words, its unreadable. Seems, someone did a spell-check and just took the first choice.
Besides that, totally unrealistic.
on July 24, 2012
Great! Well written and amusing. A touch more predictable than it might have been, but fun anyway.
on Sep. 27, 2012
Well written, well edited (a rarity in this genre), and so raunchy it's breathtaking. Definitely one for re-reading!
on Sep. 27, 2012
Poor Brittany! one little misadventure with Beauregard, and she's on on a fast slide dowwn, into -- everything.
Raunchy and explicit; a great read (if you like it over the top)! Very well written. Get the sequel at the same time.
on Sep. 27, 2012
Hot read. Well written. (Nicole's later works are better proofed.) Nicole has a disgusting, dirty, raunchy gutter-mind. I love you, girl!
When the Boss Submitted
on Nov. 02, 2012
Not badly written, but lacks imagination. The premise could have led the story much further, the motivations were blah, and the ending was lacking.
on Nov. 04, 2012
Well written and hot! That there was a twist at the end was predictable, I expected it, and was totally surprised that it wasn't the one I expected. Well done!
Kendra 2.5: Kendra, Greg and Alan
on Nov. 04, 2012
Much too "menu", wihout the passion: "She then pulled out of... Kendra then positioned herself... Alan then lifted his... Kendra then took the dildo out of...
on Jan. 13, 2013
A really good read. Romantic and Hot -- emphasis on the first. It's in my reread list.
on April 17, 2013
Opinions vary! I loved it. You write well - so hot!
on Nov. 26, 2013
A nice romance.
Yes, the story is a bit trite, but sooo on target and so well written it may be my favorite book ever.
on June 01, 2014
Bad grammar destroys the mediocre writing.
"as they peaked above the dress..."
"to test her knew plot tonight, she..."
"she'd right down every moment."
Even the title is off. I expected to read about powerful secretions...
Marisol, take some English courses, or fire your proof reader.
Bride Of The Family
on July 30, 2014
AuThor does not know where a clip is.
on Nov. 20, 2014
Not really a story, more like a word painting. This is really great!
Three More Wishes: Be Kind To Your Genie
on Feb. 01, 2015
Romantic and sexy. I loved it.
Confused, though -- is this written for men or for women?
-- Women are getting most of the orgasms, but protagonist is male.
Warning: Male protagonist builds a "harem" - might offend some.
The Babe Bike Blues
on Feb. 16, 2015
On my fourth (not last) read!
Romantic! Sexy! Yeah, miracle cures are improbable, but so what! Characters have depth enough to really involve you.
on Feb. 19, 2015
Just Great! Sweet romance with lots of sex.
A coming-of-age story with twists.
The author's writing style and clean prose flow well and help you get involved with the characters.
A Priestly Seduction
on March 08, 2015
Spelling errors on the sales blurb turn me off to the whole story.
From Slave Too Empress
on March 08, 2015
Wrong words and spelling errors everywhere, even in the title. Prose is stilted and awkward. Plot is nonexistent. Eroticism is nonexistent.
This is not an author to choose.
Amy's Prescription (Doctor Dom Erotica)
on March 29, 2015
Well written and HOT. As others mentioned, written with a light, amusing style, right up 'til it got super-hot. Immediately, I went back to smashwords to seek out more by Connie.
on June 21, 2015
Just awful. Erotic, but the really bad writing and bad grammar makes it too difficult to read. Additionally, the use of language is childish -- "shitter" is not an erotic name for that part of the anatomy. Any plot that exists is ruined by internal timing conflicts and other faults. I added this author to my "never read again" list.
Other than that, ...
Making the MILF List-Episodes 1 & 2: Making MILF #1
on July 29, 2015
Great Read, and very HOT. characters have personality, actions make sense, and situations are "realistic enough".
Really good writing style, and not full of the errors caused by sloppy proofing.
I'm going back for more by this author -- probably a lot more.
Making the MILF LIst-Episode 3: A Blond and Mom
on Aug. 06, 2015
Wow, better than the first! Really well written, and well-developed, though implausible, characters. But implausible isn't new to erotic romance, nor to fiction in general.
This is hot stuff, but if you like the genre, then a definite "Yes".
Making the MILF LIst-Episode 5: The Last MILF and More
on Aug. 07, 2015
Wow! Consistently high quality, all four books in the series.
This is a very raunchy book; read it for that.
But it's more than that. The characters are all well developed (pun not intended, but true), and all people I'd (you'd) like to spend time with. Written effectively in the first person, we follow the emotional growth of the narrator. Situations are a little staged, but all fiction is like that.
on Aug. 13, 2015
JJ writes well! This is one of the author's better works.
If you're into light bondage (not my thing usually, but...), then by all means, jump in. The heroine is likable, the protagonist (emphasis on "agonist" admirable) and the sex hot. Hard to believe a woman could orgasm that much.
Eight Nights on the Job
on Aug. 30, 2015
Nice little story, The "heroine" is sweet and loving, and seems to love being raunchy.
But, Candice, a nock is the piece on an arrow that the bowstring goes into. A knock is the sound of nuckles (sic) tapping on a door, table, or such.
Sharing the MILF List-Episode #1: Practicing Sharing the MILF LIst
on Sep. 03, 2015
We start to see Sonny struggle with doubts, while continuing to charge ahead with the plan, trying to keep to it while improvising as circumstances develop. Still very well written and very hot. No fading on a great record. I'll skarf up all the rest as they appear.
Woman On Top
on Nov. 16, 2015
Very well written, hot, but not quite kinky enough. Also, it is well-proof-read. I hate the distraction of bad proofing.
I am buying the whole collection; these free starters (teasers) are a great introduction to a writer's style.
I is for Insatiable
on Dec. 01, 2015
This is the hottest, dirtiest, loving erotica I have ever read. A young woman gets pulled (leaps enthusiastically) into the world of filthy family love. She tells the story.
This definitely demands sequels.
Vacation at Auntie's; A Short Story of Incest
on Dec. 07, 2015
Ms Greene's work is always worthwhile! This is not her best, but still far better than most other erotica authors.
This one contains kinky whole-family loving incest stuff, with a nice twist at the end -- definitely worth a read and a re-read.
If you read this and don't know Ms Greene's other work, you might find it difficult to believe that this is not her best. Starting here could be your best plan, as things will start great and just get better.
Mom Will Do Anything...Even Her Son
on Feb. 14, 2016
Not that a slow buildup is bad -- just that this one dragged.
So,read first 20%, skip to 50%, and read from there.
Sons Can't Resist
on March 20, 2016
Really terrible writing. The very first sentence made no sense, and it did not get better: "Abby whistled her favorite song as she cooked Eric his favorite things had been awkward since the submarine.".
Busty Randy: Daddy's Special Girl
on March 21, 2016
Other than not appreciating the author scolding the reader ìn the intro, and being annoyed by the constantly changing text size (one paragraph too small for comfortable reading and the next much too large), the sex was hot, but drugged slavery is not my thing, and was not in the teaser. Rated a pass!
on April 10, 2016
At first, I thought it a hot read, but, by 1/8 of the way through, the repetitious references to heat got tedious: hot pussy, burning me, too hot, super heated (sic), and on and on and ...
There are other things a pussy can feel like, most better than just heat: squeezing, milking, like a gloved hand, and other things to describe.
This one's a miss.
Extending the MILF List-Episode #10: A Mother and Daughter Extension
on July 10, 2016
It is strange to watch Sonny grow. This is supposed to be erotic, and it is (very), but it's more. We watch him struggling and growing, as his seduction skills complicate a life that includes school, family, and a serious desire to keep each woman in his life happy. Still, it's mostly about good sex. You can tell it is written for men, but the women get most of the orgasms.
Seems totally unrealistic, except that I knew a guy like Sonny, many years ago in college.
Extending the MILF List-Episode #9: Collaring the MILFs
on July 10, 2016
Every book in the series is great: the same constantly high quality, same aggressive, loving approach to women, same hot encounters, but different situations and different personalities. It does not get stale.
Extending the MILF List-Episode #11: Beginning a Mother-Daughter Drama
on July 10, 2016
Sonny's continuing frustrations with double-D's teasing antics seem to be coming to head. In this episode, everything explodes.
When it's crunch time and things look bleak, Sonny's back-up persona of total openness and honesty carries him through, and gets him laid some more, of course.
My Best Friend My Mom His Mom and Her Dog
on Aug. 22, 2016
Awful writing, bad grammar, missing words, run-on sentences, sloppy reuse of words, and incorrect, misleading punctuation all result in total distraction from the story.
Seemed like the plot-line could have made a good read, but was told so simplistically as to be unbelievable.
One more author for my "never read" list.
Extending the MILF List-Episode #13: How Much Sex Can One Man Have? Freaky Friday
on Aug. 23, 2016
The whole series is enthralling, and this volume is no exception. Clearly written for men, but it is the women who get most of the orgasms. Clearly, the protagonist loves women, not just sex with women, and, just as clearly, so does the author.
Medium, please write more! Please write faster! Feed my addiction!
All in the Family, my Wife and my Father
on Aug. 27, 2016
This could have been a really good read, but the editing issues (particularly the missing words) make it too jarring to flow reasonably. I found myself rereading a sentence or paragraph several times, trying to figure out what the author was saying. I gave up half way through.
Daddy's Little Valentines
on Sep. 07, 2016
This author needs a couple semesters of grammar lessons, and then two of sentence structure. Perhaps a good proof-reader could solve these.
The prose is just too error-filled to be enjoyable.
This author goes to my "never read" list.
on Sep. 10, 2016
Oh, my! Such a good story. I'm half in love with Mouse already.
The writing flows well, pulls the reader in, and makes the plot come alive.
And, besides, the sex is hot and loving.
I'n reading the second now, an cannot wait for more.
Mom Has Fantasies, Too!
on Sep. 25, 2016
He's sitting back . Her pussy is grinding on his knee. Her nipple is in his mouth and her face is buried in his neck.
This impossible position totally destroys the image that took ten pages to build.
Remainder is "same-old", unremarkable sex scenes.
Laura, you've done much better than this.
on Nov. 12, 2017
Slow and awful, but got a bit better at the end.
Using a hyphen with no spaces in place of a dash was terribly distracting. Each time, reading flow stopped till I could reinterpret from a hyphenated word to a dash punctuation.
Skip this author, until she grows up.