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Smashwords book reviews by Calisto

  • Passionate on Nov. 09, 2013
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    I've read the previous version but couldn't resist the pretty new cover, and it was free, so I checked out the rewrite. I'm glad I did. The writing has improved noticeably (maybe a professional editor helped in this version), and so has the story. I don't want to spoil things, so I'll just say there's a much more plausible turn of events. Still think it needed to be a full-length novel.