ChloeW

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Smashwords book reviews by ChloeW

  • Family Recipe on May 22, 2020

    Insipid and cliche. There were a number of plot things that should have been caught by a good editor which would have improved the story a lot. I've been following Lisa Henry for quite a while now, and this is well below her usual standards. I'm surprised she'd allow her name to be attached to such an amateur effort. (This didn't affect my star rating, because it's right in the description--which I appreciate--but the age difference is oddly huge. It was just a really weird choice and it didn't improve the story, only took away from it, since it wasn't believable at all.)
  • Deep Waters on July 04, 2020

    Terrible. Really needed an editor to fix all the grammar errors and tell the author to quit using "the other man" and "the blond" every other paragraph. It's too bad, because the story could've been really gripping and the characters were quite interesting, but appallingly amateur writing ruined it.
  • Royal Boy on March 28, 2022

    This was fun! Silly and cheesy and unrealistic, but I enjoyed it a bit. My expectations were for a fun sexy bit of daddy kink and little boy, with a little bit of plot to keep it interesting. That's exactly what I got! I'll check out the other books in this series, for sure.