The Fifth Beauty
on Jan. 29, 2015
Enjoyable story, albeit with a few spelling mistakes (confusion between insure and ensure, as well as wondering and wandering).
In The Moment
on Jan. 31, 2015
Generally well written and well told story with a few minor issues. First, the French language does not have the letter "á", only "à" or "â", but "Román" might not be meant as a French name. Second, if parts of the dialogue is to be written in French, it should be edited by a fluent, if not native, French speaker (the recurring idiom should be "n'est-ce pas", not "n'est pas"). Beyond the editing issues with French, there were a few (very few considering the length) other sections that could have used more thorough editing. Overall, however, very well done.
on Feb. 01, 2015
Very powerful for such a short read!
on Feb. 02, 2015
Hot read, but odd writing style in my opinion.
on Feb. 04, 2015
Very short, well written, good erotica.
Sexed Up, Tied Down Book One & Two
on March 12, 2015
This is a very well written short story with very colourful imagery evoked by the writing, although at times it gets to be just a little too much. Very enticing erotic scene and good protagonist in Hailey.
on March 14, 2015
Well written, but too much head hopping for my liking
on June 10, 2015
Well written, despite a few mistakes. Well told, but not my style.
Living the Illusion
on June 12, 2015
Well written (albeit with a few passages that need more editing) and highly intriguing story, but the author seems overly fond of capitals, instant messaging acronyms and initialisms, and adding multiple exclamation marks to emphasize a point.