While overall I did enjoy it, the plot had something in lacking. The character's were kind of believable yet also not. I believe everyone has their boiling points, but at the mid point in the story, I got tired of Bradley putting up with Justin's abuse. I did however believe in the amount of shit Brad had to do to make end's meet, even with Justin living there. I'm also kind of intrigued by Tom White and how he might play more of a role if he does, perhaps a romantic rival who knows. Still, Justin reminds me of the stereotypical homophobic guy who doesn't wanna be called but basically does all the same stuff gays do. Not the best review I know. Other than that, I really had no other issues. Good grammar, no real issues I noticed in terms of continuity issues. While an erotica book at best, plot could have been stepped up a notch, but the author did say it was something simple so its excusable.