Location: United Kingdom
Member Since:
Nov. 15, 2014
Evelynxxx
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Smashwords book reviews by Evelynxxx
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The Christmas Kiss
on Nov. 15, 2014
(no rating)
I am not quite sure if I was reading the same story as the below comments or the author may have done a new version as I don't remember seeing the name Ryan or experienced. I think with a little amendments here and there this book could be really good. It is rather witty and enjoyable to read. I like how relatable the main character is and the scenario. As I say a little amendments and this book would be quite good.
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The Christmas Kiss
on Nov. 19, 2014
Can I just say there was commas in the story after looking back over the story. As I said in my previous review while the story wasn't grammatically perfect it was a very good story. It might not necessarily be everyone's cup of tea.
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Sabrina's Chastity Belt
on Nov. 19, 2014
I couldn't quite work out where the book started and there were hardly any paragraphs or structure to the book. The story had enjoyable elements such as the rhetorical questions and it was fun to read. With improvement and structure the story could be very good