This is a short M/M shifter short story. It is probably too short, it would have born more development easily, but it lacks neither fun nor romantic moments thanks to its likeable, goofy leads. Writing is professional, editing satisfying.
This short M/M romance is not awful or badly written but it reads like the transcript of a conversation where one person tells another what happened to a friend.
There is no narrative tension, just a very politically correct account of how things should be in relationships and in dealing with difficult issues such as homelessness.