Hope Evans


Hello! My name is Hope, I'm 16 years old and I live in Canada.

Smashwords Interview

Describe your desk
My desk is virtually non-existant.
Where did you grow up, and how did this influence your writing?
I grew up in Alliston. It's a fairly nice place to grow up and I really started to enjoy writing when we had to write a narrative as a class assignment in grade 2.
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Price: Free! Words: 2,740. Language: British English. Published: May 15, 2014. Categories: Fiction » Plays & Screenplays » European
(5.00 from 1 review)
Clarice Dupont had no one and loved no one but the man who loved another. Desolate and miserable, she lived her short life.

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1800s    france    love   

Smashwords book reviews by Hope Evans

  • Imperial Spear on May 15, 2014
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    A few tips: Paragraphs. Use them. Every time a different person speaks, it's a new line; every time you write about something different, it's a new line. Your stories are nearly impossible to read because they are just one paragraph. Proofreading. Do it. Some mistakes should be immediately noticeable if you read everything over at least once before submitting it. Punctuation. Use that too. Sentences become confusing without proper punctuation. Personalities. Your characters need them. This Xavier seems, if you'll forgive the term, to be a Gary Sue. How are we at part 5 when it's only chapter 3? Tenses. Maintain them. You can't switch from past tense to present tense in only a couple of sentences.