Alex Barton

Smashwords book reviews by Alex Barton

  • My Wife's Family; A Short Story of Incest on Dec. 12, 2012

    A sweetly subtle romantic incest story that only Esmeralda could write. The story is like a piquant hors d'oeuvre. Finishing it, the reader is left yearning for more, and, as it is a 'Greene Short' a little more depravity, but it is still perfect in and of itself. Like all of Esmeralda's stories, a total pleasure to read.
  • Through Her Ass Darkly on Dec. 15, 2012

    An astonishing book and an amazing bargain... Written with an obvious knowledge of the people and places he is describing, the author never, ever forgets he is writing a novel to arouse the reader and hell's bells does he deliver. Each sex scene is more powerful than the last and I just hope this book is only the first of many by Mr Riggs...
  • Jenna's Grand Tour on Dec. 25, 2012

    hrhsophia is absolutely right: goodness knows why Alison Shaw chooses to give her work away but I, for one, am not complaining. She writes intelligent, exciting erotica that is a joy to read and deliciously hot. I have snapped up Jenna's first adventure to read after 'Grand Tour' and look forward eagerly to reading whatever Ms Shaw publishes next... Definitely five stars!!
  • Corporate Ties on Jan. 02, 2013
    (no rating)
    Is this a joke? A 7310 word elaborate satire masquerading as an erotic story? It is indescribably bad, waste-of-time bad - even if it *is* free... Minus stars, if that's even possible.
  • Julie And The Best Man on Jan. 09, 2013

    I like to support Smashwords authors by buying their work. I want them to succeed, to go on writing erotica for their enjoyment and my pleasure. But it has to be a two-way street - the story has to be worth the money and in this case it most assuredly was not. Badly written, not remotely realistic, the story - such as it was - didn't even live up to the title, never mind arouse me. It was a doodle based on a supposedly sexy idea that was never developed and on which I wasted $2.99. Not a lot, one might think, but Sonia Robinson lost a lot more than I did: she lost my respect.
  • Online F%ck Match- Men's Erotica on Jan. 11, 2013

    Waste of time - author's and mine.
  • The Dog Upstairs; A Short Story of Bestiality on Jan. 20, 2013

    You know how there are stories you simply *know* will always get you off? Stories that arouse you, entertain you, make you smile with delighted pleasure at the same time as they send you through the roof with intense arousal? This is one of those stories for me. It's kinky, subtle, amusing, wonderfully written and *very* hot. I love it more every time I read it.
  • Goody Two-Shoes on Jan. 20, 2013

    Only one thing wrong with this story. Esmeralda, when are you going to write Part 2...? Please, pretty please?
  • Five Thousand Dollar Hooker on Feb. 27, 2013

    Stunning - completely stunning... Intensely erotic, characters you care about, really well written - I look forward eagerly to reading Ms Beltray's next story. Hopefully starring the voluptuous Niko, the $5k hooker of the title...?
  • Riding the Ponies (Taboo Bestiality) on April 02, 2013

    Yep, seconded. If dog, horse and f/f sex are your thing, Mr. (really? told from a very convincing woman's POV) Knight delivers in spades. BTW - I noticed my favorite author Esmeralda Greene was involved too - and that's a recommendation in itself.
  • A Chain of Mothers 2; More Erotic Tales of Incest on April 25, 2013

    Immensely enjoyable, laugh out loud funny at times (a truly delicious ending to the second story), perfectly constructed and intensely erotic. Esmeralda writes like a dream and I love every word.
  • Creamed Buns on May 15, 2013

    Hello Osric134 - I wondered where you'd gone to and I'm delighted to have discovered you again... Delighted also to see you've lost none of your delight in writing about anal sex, incest and well-endowed black men. I just bought 15 of your books in one go, including this one, so be assured there's a delighted fan waiting to read everything you write.
  • Cheryl's Gym Teacher: A Story of Passion and Patience in Mid-Life on July 29, 2013

    Ms Rossi, you asked for reader's comments so: Take care when you change point-of-view quickly: it can be confusing for the reader to be in Cheryl's mind and then, in the next paragraph, Danny's. The sex scenes were wonderful: explicit, erotic, just the right amount of awareness of what turns the reader on by who is doing what to whom. The sexual detail (e.g. when Cheryl checks herself out in the mirror) was really arousing. Maybe it's just me but I don't want reality in an erotic story so I hate when characters discuss condoms/say 'I'm clean' so they can ride bareback. I want - need - bareback because cum/spurting climaxes are deeply erotic: condoms aren't. Entirely your choice but it's obvious you like to write down-and-dirty which safe sex isn't... Do I want lots of romantic entanglements, soul-searching, the realisation that love will win through? I would happily cut all that by 50% because what works for you works for me: a sexy couple who can't keep their hands off each other getting it on as often as possible. Tears dripping down a face or another bodily fluid - well, which would you choose..? Hope these comments are constructive/helpful - and very much looking forward to your next story.
  • Spicing Things Up; A Short Story of Incest on July 31, 2013

    On her blog Esmeralda says this is one of her favourite stories - and it's not hard to see why. Funny, erotic, with a deliciously depraved MILF who lusts after the men in her life, it's a wonderful Greene short to treasure. Definitely five stars...
  • Bondslave on Aug. 06, 2013

    There are two (sort of) Georgia Foxs. Both write very erotic romances set (typically) in 11th century England, shortly after the Norman invasion in 1066. I love both Georgias but the one writing this series for Twisted Erotica is having so much fun it's infectious. Cleverly plotted, convincing and likeable characters, lashings of delicious sex - what's not to love? As long as she keeps writing them I, and I hope many others, will buy and enjoy her wonderful books.
  • A Day at the Beach with His Boys (Lucky Series – Taboo Bestiality Erotica) on Aug. 10, 2013

    Great, if very kinky fun, just like the previous book in the 'Lucky' series and 'Caught on Camera'. If M/M with the dog getting in the act is your thing, don't hesitate. But, Naughti Gurl, would you consider a plea for tighter editing and lose the the damn condoms? Bareback is erotic, condoms definitely not so much...
  • The Family Business on Aug. 26, 2013

    Quite simply, sublime. For anyone who enjoys bestiality erotica, the mother lode.
  • Miriam's Belly; A Short Story of Incest and Pregnancy on Sep. 29, 2013

    What amazes me is how Esmeralda manages effortlessly to make a subject a reader might not usually find arousing - in this case pregnancy - and make it deliciously erotic. Miriam's acceptance of her children's incestuous relationship makes the story believable, witty and surprisingly subtle - not to mention smoking hot. Esmeralda is simply peerless in the imaginative quality of her erotic stories.
  • Confessions of a Male Porn Star Part 2 The Interview on March 23, 2014

    I'm sorry readers have been remiss in giving Ms Stone's books good reviews: let's see if I can make up for that. This is really well-written, believable erotica which isn't as common as I'd like. I had to buy Part 2 of this series because I enjoyed Part 1 so much and, believe me, I wasn't disappointed. I look forward eagerly to reading/buying more stories about Johnny Deep, or any other characters Ms Stone's talented pen conjures up for our pleasure.
  • A Night At The Theatre on April 19, 2014

    Definitely five stars for the quality/heat of the writing and the delicious situations. But ... I so wish Sandy hadn't written the guys wear condoms. As Ali the sexy heroine says, 'There's nothing I love more than getting my ass filled with cum' but she didn't!
  • Mom Gets What She Wants; A Short Story of Incest on May 15, 2014

    An utterly wonderful, carefully plotted, thoroughly arousing Greene Short that proves, once again, Esmeralda's mastery of the erotic short story. Newbie writers and old hands alike can learn so much from her - this is how it's done to be done *really* well!!!
  • Erotica For The Soul: A Collection Of Rebecca Milton's Finest Short Stories on June 18, 2014

    Not in the accepted sense erotica (no point in looking for the conventional tags with regard to content) but beautifully written, carefully plotted stories, each with a premise, exposition and denouement. As she says, if it is erotica and romance for the thinking person that attracts you, Ms Milton's skilful use of language will fit the bill perfectly.
  • Bisexual Threesome (MMF) on June 21, 2014

    Sadly, truly terrible. No story, just fucking. And the punctuation is a joke: sentences should start with a capital letter, sentences should end with a full stop, there should be a comma before closing speech marks as in "Please fuck me," Karen said and not Said Karen. Please, Katie, read the stories of Esmeralda Greene to see how to write erotica.
  • Mother of the Groom; A Short Story of Incest on July 22, 2014

    Not a 'typical' Esmeralda story - if there is such a thing. The sex, as always, is highly erotic and the writing simply perfect, but there's an unusual undertone of wistfulness and regret that makes this storyline more thoughtful and I found myself thinking about Ursula long after I'd finished reading. I'd love to read more stories about her...please?
  • Parental Discretion is Advised on Aug. 30, 2014

    Certainly agree with everything Randy Rob says. You know when you're reading really exciting erotica and you think, 'That scene was amazing - now if only the author takes it one step further on...'? Well, Mr Scott does: he makes you anticipate the best and then delivers. So much so that when I'd bought this book I bought all his others on the strength of it. Does that count as a strong recommendation...?
  • Faith In Jamaica on Sep. 11, 2014

    An author writes a book, publishes it on Smashwords and hopes people will buy it, read it and say nice things to encourage other people to buy and read it. The problem comes when there's a big gap between someone buying it and saying, "Wow, f*uck, this is truly an *amazing* book - I must give it five stars!" which is a long-winded way of saying I wish I'd reviewed it sooner, and, yes, it *is* an amazing book. Faith is so loveable, so deliciously hot, so wonderfully naive and yet so completely into the pleasures of big black cock in every orifice I wanted it to last forever and absolutely loved every word. *Definitely* five stars!
  • Emma's Desire on Oct. 30, 2014

    Mr Scott's novels keep getting better and better. As usual, the build-up to father and daughter sleeping together is taken slowly and made wholly convincing; the orgy scene is particularly well written because it's extremely erotic but we never lose sight of the principal couple whose story this is; and there's less of the concern about sexual hygiene which jars the reader's immersion in the story. Altogether five stars and I, for one, would really like to read more of his stories connecting together as this one skilfully does.
  • Everything Butt on Oct. 31, 2014

    Wonderful - I *adore* double anal in erotica. But ... that story was too short and the whole novella ended so abruptly! Please, Ms Alexandra, more about the 'Backdoor Bitches' Club...?
  • The Storm on Jan. 05, 2015

    Tristan Sparrow and I share two passions: for stories where the main characters are related, and petite women with (very) large breasts. So I found 'The Storm' as hugely enjoyable as 'The Dance' and am slowly working my way through buying and reading all his other wonderful novellas. More, please, Mr Sparrow!!
  • Alice in France on Jan. 10, 2015

    Not only highly erotic but *very* well written. What I particularly liked was the author's attention to detail: the convincing French setting, the way the two lovers assessed each location for the best place to deploy chains for their BDSM lovemaking - M.J. Carey took real care to ensure everything in the story fitted together perfectly. Sadly, not as common as you might think! Definitely five stars.
  • Grown-Up Daughter; A Short Story of Incest on July 29, 2015

    - I wish a new story from Esmeralda appeared every week but sadly it doesn't, so it's cause for celebration to scroll through the list of new titles and see a new 'Greene Short' is available. - Esmeralda's stories are always perfectly constructed where nothing is quite what it seems and 'Grown-Up Daughter' is no exception. it's not only highly erotic it's clever because it stands expectation on its head. She makes consensual incest funny, sexy and a huge pleasure to read because everyone in her story is having fun. - And oh praise be, no spelling mistakes, perfect grammar and a price that undervalues her perfection. - Did I mention I'm a HUGE fan...?
  • My Very Large Book of Erotica on Aug. 06, 2015

    - Absolutely amazing value ... over a thousand pages, more than three quarters of a million words - gorgeous busty women who enjoy sex in every story - what's not to love? - Phebe writes with a delightful lack of inhibition and her obvious pleasure in writing erotica is infectious. So no, Phebe darling, you're not crazy, just incredibly generous to your fans - thank you!
  • Twisted Fairy Tales on Nov. 13, 2015

    Entertaining and erotic, Mr Lucien has a wonderful joy in language that makes these stories a real pleasure to read. Highly recommended.
  • Educating Mom on Jan. 01, 2016

    R.M. Dexter completely understands that, to be convincing - and erotic - the central relationship in an incest novella has to build up slowly. 'Wanna fuck?' 'Fuck yeah!' just doesn't work, however sexy and well-drawn the characters. In 'Educating Mom' Andy effectively seduces his mother, slowly, carefully, with intense passion, reinforcing their mutual love and making it possible for both mother and son to express their love as lust. That his Mom has huge breasts and a gorgeous ass that Andy delights in describing (in wonderful detail!) is a fabulous bonus, heightening the power of the writing. Absolutely five stars - I loved it; have bought R.M. Dexter's other published books, and will buy further titles the moment they appear.
  • The Kennel Club Collection 1 on Jan. 03, 2016

    Delicious. If gorgeous schoolgirls being fucked silly by their (highly) affectionate doggies is your thing, don't hesitate. Ms Michaels extremely writes well, with an infectious delight in detailed description. Undoubtedly five stars. This review is for both Collections: the second is even better than the first!
  • The Kennel Club Collection 2 on Jan. 03, 2016

    Delicious. If gorgeous schoolgirls being fucked silly by their (highly) affectionate doggies is your thing, don't hesitate. Ms Michaels extremely writes well, with an infectious delight in detailed description. Undoubtedly five stars. This review is for both Collections: the second is even better than the first!
  • Down On the Family Farm: Emma Comes Home! on July 06, 2016

    A delicious novella, full of intensely erotic incestuous sex. Absolutely loved it and eagerly looking forward to buying her next book as soon as it appears!
  • Grandfather's Busty Intern on July 11, 2016

    Five stars and then another five... *Nobody* writes delicious descriptions of gorgeous busty women like RM Dexter: as I read I kept checking the page numbers because I didn't want the book to end... Stunningly erotic and perfectly written - a feast of incestuous sex that left me with only one desire unfulfilled - please, RM, anal sex...?
  • Painting Mom's Face on Aug. 06, 2016

    Ten stars if RM is planning to write a sequel, nine and a half if it's a one off - which I sincerely hope it's not...! That the hero, Connor, is able to spurt multiple massive loads is incredibly erotic, especially when the women in his life all have huge breasts and delight in having their faces, mouths, pussies and asses flooded with what Connor has to offer. I absolutely loved this book, the sensual build-ups to each situation, the wonderful descriptions of the gorgeous women, the truly amazing sex scenes. A tour-de-force of erotic writing.
  • Mom's Bridal Lingerie on Aug. 11, 2016

    Not sure why it's only me who's telling RM what a great job he's doing when 13 other people have listed him as a favorite author but so be it. Another wonderfully written and highly erotic story. So much more than an extended sex scene between a gorgeous buxom woman and her well-endowed son, this tale had a definite sting in it when not everyone in the family was happy about their incestuous love... Two (for me) highlights: the scene by the pool when Mitch gets to fuck his Mom in her beautiful ass (yay!) and the incredibly erotic vision of Mitch lying back with his legs over his head so his Mom can masturbate his cock to spurt over his face and into his mouth...made me shiver with delight to read!
  • Daddy Please? Show Me What My Pussy Is For! on Aug. 29, 2016

    I absolutely loved this story and would adore to read another about Bitsy, the huge-breasted horny teenager who decides her first lover is going to be her handsome Daddy. I loved Bitsy, I loved her equally horny BFF Tessa, and I love Nikki Syn's perfect writing - hot as hell and deliciously witty. *Please*, Nikki - another story with this sexy threesome...?
  • Cream Filled Mother-in-Law on Sep. 30, 2016
    (no rating)
    When an author writes as well as RM, reader expectations are very high. This story has all the classic RM ingredients: a convincing background, well-drawn characters (gorgeous women with massive breasts, an attractive hero with a huge cock who can come multiple times)'s just too short. And the opportunities missed! Incest - no (husband and mother-in-law); sex between mother and daughter - no; two beautiful women with six holes on offer fucked multiple times - no; anal sex - no... It broke my heart when everything flared up and then, just as suddenly, ended. For me RM's erotica is perfection personified - but only partly so this time.
  • Dogs at Work on Oct. 06, 2016

    Very creative, very erotic and very enjoyable. More, please, Mr Morningwood...?
  • Cream Filled Mother-in-Law on Oct. 13, 2016

    I read it again... =)
  • Bundle Of Shame: 5 Taboo Tales on Jan. 08, 2017

    Really well written, very erotic stories. None of them were quite what they seemed which was clever. Really enjoyed 'Shame on Sadie' particularly... Definitely five stars!
  • Loving Mother Mind Control on Jan. 14, 2017

    If I gave this 'book' the no stars it deserves, there would be no review to show up on the page and prospective purchasers/readers need to know what they are letting themselves in for. Truly, utterly awful. Nonsensical and totally unerotic. A single sentence of several hundred words isn't clever, it's showing-off. Did no-one at Lot's Cave read this before accepting it for publication? Mr Matheson may pose all the metaphysical questions he chooses: in the future I shall be blissfully free of being concerned. I will waste no more money on his 'writing' and I would advise others to do the same.
  • My Sister's Breasts on Jan. 14, 2017

    Am I missing something? Even a story costing only $.99 is supposed to have a beginning, middle and end but this doesn't: It simply stops and to hell with the reader. Thank you for treating me like an idiot and here's one back: one star to tell anyone else considering buying it not to waste their money.
  • Eternally Bound on Jan. 17, 2017
    (no rating)
    Can you reasonably review a book when you're only a quarter of the way through it? What the hell do I care - this is an exceptional book and I want other people to buy and read it... Meredith Jaussaud has created a perfect scenario in a gorgeous, buxom lady professor who is a product of incest and desperately turned on by the thought of encouraging one of her students to explore his ultimate romance - falling in love with his own mother. The novel exactly captures the intense eroticism of incest and is just breathtakingly arousing. Ten stars at least - and I shall be back with a second review when I've finished it.
  • Eternally Bound on Jan. 26, 2017

    The reason this book is so amazing is not only because of the breathtaking eroticism - not one but two scenes of ass worship leading to anal sex that are just mind-blowing - but because Ms. Jaussaud takes her time, establishing the two main relationships and bringing them to an ultimately extremely satisfying conclusion. This is incest fiction as it *should* be written and so seldom is. Wonderful.
  • My Niece's High School Graduation on March 17, 2017

    I'm confused. This book has been published before and I bought it. It's a great book and I enjoyed it. But the previous version has vanished in favor of this one and Smashwords did not say 'You own this book' which it usually does. So is it a rewrite or a straight republish? Either way, there is a horrendous error in Chapter 2 with seven pages - 19 to 26 - repeated. Wosshappenin', RM...?
  • Gay/Rotica on May 29, 2017

    Great stories. Well written - with no typos or grammar faults! - and extremely erotic. Look forward to reading more by Jake.
  • Pride & Prejudice & Passion: Jane Austen for the Adult Reader on Aug. 27, 2017

    Pastiche Jane Austen is extremely difficult to carry off - I know, I've tried and I'm English so it ought to be easy but, believe me, it isn't. Dominic Ridler knows *exactly* how to do it with style and wit and has written an extremely erotic, most entertaining book. Definitely five stars.
  • The True Confessions of Jane Eyre on Aug. 28, 2017

    I read Dominic Ridler's 'Pride & Prejudice' first but, if anything, this book is even better written. A glorious pastiche, it has everything devotees of erotic submission could wish for, particularly in the wonderfully erotic scenes with Jane and Count Orsini. The only problem is that the last quarter of the book, where Jane meets Mr Rochester, is less about sexual pleasure and more about sexual punishment in all its painful forms. I regretted that but lovers of BDSM will surely not agree!
  • The "Greene Shorts" Incest Collection; Volume 3 on Sep. 05, 2017

    Esmeralda has posted on her blog that this might be the last collection of her stories to be published. If that's the case then I'll both mourn the loss and celebrate that I've had so much lasting pleasure from reading her wonderful, wonderful erotica. She brings humor to heat, sweetness to sweaty sex and has made me shake my head in genuine admiration at her amazing writing more times than I can count. Any story or collection of hers is an event: even though this one contains several that avid readers might already have, buy it just to have one last glorious chance to be aroused by Esmeralda's incomparable erotic storytelling.
  • Chloe's Summer Job on April 17, 2018

    If you're into anal sex, buy this book. It's a long time since an author took my breath away, but Hope Red did...
  • Dominant Cheerleader on May 03, 2019

    I howled with disappointment when this novella ended so abruptly. The set-up was perfect, the descriptions perfect - especially of the gorgeous Brooke, a typical Dexter heroine with her voluptuous breasts - and the sexual action had, seemingly, only just begun when, quite suddenly, it ended. R.M. writes stunningly good erotica and a new title is always an event but this time the blue touchpaper fizzled out before the firework ignited.
  • Penny Meets the Neighbors on May 08, 2019

    I really *really* liked this novella for three reasons. One, it was credible. So much erotica is simply wham-bam right from the first word but this wasn't. The characters were totally believable, the women so well described I could picture them easily (particularly Penny and Alyssa), and the erotic action was extremely hot. Two, it had a plot! A real, live carefully-worked-out sequence of events that developed realistically and ended convincingly. And three, Philip Mitchell Stein may be a guy but when it comes to describing loving lesbian sex he sure as hell knows what works. Definitely a book to read and re-read. Although Philip...including a little anal in the final scene woulda killed ya...? =)