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  • Black Keys on April 27, 2023

    Good story
  • The Promise on April 28, 2023

    Like it
  • Fracture (The Chronicles Of Discord, #1) on April 28, 2023

    Good one
  • Broken City on April 28, 2023

    Like it a lot. Different kind of romance writing. Highly recommend it to anyone who wants to be pulled into another world
  • Hired Bride on June 26, 2023

    Story flows neatly. Pride is bit scary :) her grandmother's attachment towards them is unusual...
  • Pinkie: A Short Story on June 26, 2023

    Nice story
  • Wolf of Ash on June 26, 2023

    Though the story line I interesting, it is kind of rushed.For Talia to move on from the one whom she loved as fated mate it will take more time I think..instead she is relaxed and reading book within few days after captured by the enemy
  • Soul-Bonded to the Alien on June 26, 2023
    (no rating)
    Trying to read many times but somehow it is becoming difficult to read after sometime..not able to tell where it losses interest.
  • Beneath the Fallen City (The Omni Towers, Book 1) on June 26, 2023

    Trying to read many times but somehow it is becoming difficult to read after sometime..not able to tell where it losses interest. Mostly the name calling 'ruin rats' disturbs the story flow i guess..
  • Hope(less) on June 26, 2023

    Good one. Wish he speaks with her early..
  • To Deceive a Highlander on June 26, 2023

    Old fashioned way of thinking... female lead who can accept being expected to be pure while the male lead will be having experience with women..and male lead thinking it might be needed for kings to be witnessed in their union with their wife first time.. ( though as he is only a lord he doesn't need that he rejects witness. what if he is king? he might have allowed) horrifying..
  • Life in the Palace (Book 1 - The Palace Saga) on June 26, 2023

    Should be given five stars for such a daring try. Trying to combine east west philosophy and religion practices..kind of difficult to understand sometimes.. feels like mixing advaita vetanta in between which in itself bit different from others which requires carefull explanations to understand.
  • Flying Fancies Episode One on June 26, 2023

    Interesting story..
  • The Rise of the Phoenix on Sep. 04, 2023

    Highly recommended. Absolutely stunning work
  • Malcolm on Jan. 18, 2024

    As Naomi's mother died of an overdose, her being with in love with drug dealer doesn't seem to be forming a nice story line. Other than that the story is ok.
  • Viper (A Vampire MC Romance) on Jan. 18, 2024

    Good
  • Holding Out For a Hero on Jan. 18, 2024

    Cute story. The starting of the story reminded me the story of king Dilipa of Raghu dynasty. It was said that as he was going to his wife, he didn't pay proper respect to the holy cow. So she cursed like our heroin in this story that ' for whatever reason the king goes will fail till he pay the due respect'...
  • Raised to Kill on Jan. 18, 2024

    Good one.. their height difference is bit weird.
  • Intangible: An Inhuman Protectors Romance on Jan. 18, 2024

    The story started with nice plot. Wish the length of the story could have been shortened or the story could have been broken into two parts. I am personally against pairing inexperienced heroin with experienced hero. So i lost interest after her declaration and his declaration in his foster home.. other than that the story is taking us into the places where the author's imagination goes..
  • Hers to Keep on Jan. 19, 2024

    Story is entertaining. One think that disturbs is Grayson's brother. I don't think fourteen year teenage boy checking out his elder brother's girlfriend is okay by any norms. Though him being abandoned by his parents made him angry and he is coping with different mechanisms, don't you think it will be difficult in reality to live with such a boy. Elder brother's girlfriend is supposed to be looked upon as a mother. Isn't it?
  • The Billionaire's Contract Marriage on Jan. 19, 2024
    (no rating)
    As the tag mentioned 'indian heroin', thought of sharing the Indian perspective. As per indian culture this story line will fall under taboo category. Even in they are not blood related she should b Considered as his sister.
  • Fake Dating My Grumpy Billionaire Boss on Jan. 19, 2024

    Sweet..
  • The Target on Jan. 20, 2024

    Didn't realize it is a cliff hanger, and mentioning of clark had sex with her marks before killing them is kind of betrayal to her dead fiance. Kind of offends to learn that she started to sleep with enemies to gain access on her own as something she picked up in the field is cruel. Though these things are mentioned very few times, it dilute the story lines.
  • Happily Ever Single on Jan. 22, 2024

    First part of the story is fun..
  • Earth on Jan. 24, 2024

    Very interesting story.. highly recommend it
  • Earning the Cut on Feb. 10, 2024

    The first half of story is very emotional, where as in the second half it seems to be going towards the toxic cycle of repeats of mistakes of others. Though the following comments are not just particular about this story, as the author has very keen observation towards habit formation, I wish to ask here which I felt like asking many other authors but felt that they won’t be able to understand. See, there is a toxic cycle going on for generation, someone born not as a result of prayer for a child but a mistake who happens while using sex as a coping mechanism, then the kid grows up in the same environment and often goes through the same cycle - use drug, violence then sex as coping mechanism. Which in turn possibly produce another generation of children. Why can’t any author comes up with some strong bold different storyline. Where the boy/girl born in that negative cycle refuses to use violence or sex as coping mechanism. While reading these stories they might show possibly the background of these people and why they are the way they are. But it doesn’t give hope to humanity. Can't any author create an real hero from an hopeless environment? If we can't even imagine, how the reality is going to change for better?
  • Hell Week on Feb. 10, 2024

    All characters and events depicted in this work are fictitious. Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead is purely coincidental' --- Does the portray of “Chinese" people is just resemblance? Not an actual china and Chinese people?. Lot of good talent is wasted in propagating hatred is what I would say about this book. Or is it another ploy to psychology weaken another countries from certain countries? Saying 'America falls’..again and again.. repeat it in story. Their people will get it in their mind and they will start to fall? Is it the expectation? So while trying to rate from the intention of the author, it should be in negative numbers as the author cultivates deep hatred towards one specific country or other - both not fictitious.
  • Love Potion #5 on Feb. 10, 2024

    Sweet story.
  • Seed On Fire: A Romantic Suspense Novel about Family, Loyalty, and Parenthood on Feb. 10, 2024

    It is homely story. The way the infant was being appreciated by everyone is very cute. What is shocking is the sneak peak from the ‘Playing with Fire’.
  • Piper LeVine, A Gypsy's Truth on Feb. 14, 2024

    Captivating story.. recommend it
  • Cowboy in a Kilt on Feb. 15, 2024

    I wish the boyfriend character could have been handled differently. Other than it makes good storyline.