A well written piece that keeps you guessing until the end. As with the other reviews, the ending was average. All in all, a great read that we recommend! We look forward to reading more from this author.
This has the potential to become a very intriguing Sci Fi novel if the author is ever compelled to embellish on this tale of intergalactic love. The author's writing style is solid but the overall plot left many questions unanswered due to Mariella's lack of knowledge ie: why is Earth Forbidden? It would be great to see this story fleshed out a bit more. Well done, a great story!
Well written story with a steady tempo and good character development for a free piece. We shared the link on IEG Facebook. Please feel free to comment and share what inspires you to write in this genre.