This story is like getting a snapshot of two people's afternoon tryst, forbidden and naughty. Very erotic, quick read that does the job. S. Kitt has many fantastic erotica novels, and I'd put this towards the middle of the pack, not her best work, but still good & juicy.
First story I've ever read from Ms. Kitt that is gay erotica, and she does a fantastic job weaving believable life events into this storyline, while still making it really hot. I would love to see this story expanded & built up into a novella.
great erotic scenes, slightly twisted because of the uncle thing ( not by blood, but by marriage) but that kinda adds to the forbidden fruit element. This one stays in the kindle for re-reading at a later time. ;)
Wow, this is a hardcore gay erotica story, with alot of m/m sex, rough & sometimes rather twisted. Has the forbidden element (brothers) that are attracted to each other but afraid to act on it, has non-consensual sex, and sometimes was pretty raunchy. I know, its erotica, right? That being said, I think women enjoy gay erotica, love the idea of men together, but we look for some of the "feelings" and/or behavior that exists in m/f relationships to be applied; but it seems men just like it straight to the point & simple, hardcore Erotica. The author is able to write some of the graphic scenes so well & descriptive that at one point my Ick factor kicked in & I could actually visualize the scene and commiserate with the young man in the swing contracption, I almost gagged in sympathy, and I mean that as a compliment.
Reading this new story reminded me why I love her books so much! She has created a wonderful new off-kilter world where magic is real and the heroes are HOT! Unique & well developed story, one of the best I've read this year.
Another fun short story by Ms. Marsden. Denise discovers quite by accident that spotting random erections is a huge turn on and starts searching them out and trying to cause them to get the rush. Even at the family Christmas party!