I think it's possible that English isn't this person's first language and so I applaud Rose for giving it a shot regardless. Let's face it, writing is tough anyway and we've got to support new authors when they put something out there or our bookstores will continue to be full of nothing but mainstream garbage like 50 shades of grey and fucking twilight rip offs. Well done Rose, I think you write with passion and when your language skills improve I'm sure your stories will too.
This book kept me company on my train rides to and from work, a delightful distraction from the mind numbing routine of the job and a comfort to know I'm not the only one going crazy in the office. Let's face it unless you're making 'Christian Grey' dollars at work everyone hates their job at some point.