Flags, and Nets, and Cannons, and Rails for the Stairs
on Oct. 21, 2012
That was incredible. I started thinking to criticize and come back to you with how it could be better, but I was blown away by the first page. I can't sum up the words, I was completely engaged and it ended so well.
The father son connections, the details, the style, in a way reminded me a lot of Kafka. It's so simple and sweet however, no rambling or lost directions.
Keep up the good work.