A great fantasy novel and I'm sure you'll develop and improve your skills over time. 5 stars for your effort and style, however on a small point your cover image clearly says copyright 2010 Colrath. Unless you are this person or have permission to use his image on the cover, don't. I know people who've been sued over copyright breaches. Secondly, there's no title on the image, even a basic title and your name is a start. But all in all it's great. :)
A friend emailed a coupon to me for this book and I've been reading it the past week as I've been out with pneumonia. Though it sometimes hurts to laugh they say laughter is the best medicine so I am hereby recommending this book to doctors everywhere. Mikey's humor isn't for the faint of heart or easily offended or the P.C. crowd but the story keeps you hooked and I think it's well worth a read for the price.