M. Pars

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Smashwords book reviews by M. Pars

  • No Place Like Amestraton on Feb. 15, 2013

    This is one of the most boring stories I have ever read. I think many details could have been omitted. The characters are not fully developed and come across as quite stupid, for want of a better word. I read it through hoping it would finally develop into an exciting, entertaining story, but was sorely disappointed. Needs to be reworked.
  • Anaxiunara (One Brief Eternity) on Feb. 28, 2013

    Marvelous! Truly a gifted storyteller. Thank you for the spiritual, philosophical and emotional (not forgetting fantastical) journey. I hope that you write more about Anna and everyone else.
  • The Unsuspecting Mage: The Morcyth Saga Book One on Aug. 28, 2013

    I have to agree with my fellow reviewers - the book lacks tension and the present tense is very difficult to follow. I think that the use of the present tense takes away any depth, rendering the story flat. I certainly would not pay money to read the remaining volumes.
  • From Across the Clouded Range on Oct. 23, 2013

    Truly epic - I could not put my iPad down. Characters are well-balanced and believable. I cannot wait for the next book. It has been a long time since I have read such a captivating story. Hats off to you! Please keep writing. Talent such as yours must be shared with the world.
  • A Thread in the Tangle (Legends of Fyrsta Book 1) on Nov. 08, 2013
    (no rating)
    How can anyone review your book if all you allow is Epub? Look at other writers - they offer many options.
  • Double Life on Jan. 26, 2014

    Was this written by a couple of teenagers? Overuse of adjectives - out of context. Too many spelling and grammatical errors. I have read about 1/3 of the story and cannot continue. Maybe this book will appeal to the young adult and teen readers, but it certainly will not help to improve their language skills.
  • The Well of Fates on Feb. 26, 2014

    Fabulous! Another great storyteller is born. I cannot wait for the next book(s). Please hurry!!
  • Illiom, Daughter of Prophecy on April 22, 2014

    A very well-written tale with believable characters. You are a gifted story teller and I cannot wait for the adventure to continue. Well done!
  • Storm of Prophecy, Book I: Dark Awakening on May 06, 2014

    A good attempt. The characters need to be fine tuned and the story needs to flow more smoothly. I felt myself becoming irritated with the utter stupidity of most characters - perhaps the author attempted to portray them as complacent, but they unfortunately did not come across as such.
  • Bound by a Dragon on May 08, 2014

    A sweet romance. The characters are believable and although the story follows the standard "romance" formula, it is very enjoyable and easy to read. I cannot wait to read more about Keira, Aaron and Anna.
  • The Church of the Wood on May 14, 2014

    Truly enchanting! The characters are real and I lived the tale with them. Keep the faery stiries coming.
  • The Orphan and the Shadow Walker: The Awakening on June 25, 2014

    Excellent! I cannot wait for more. Please hurry with the continuation. You are a gifted storyteller - a true bard. Thank you.
  • A Woman Warrior Born on July 01, 2014

    In one word, excellent! I cannot wait for more of Breea. One of the few books that I just cannot put down. Bravo!!
  • Blood Gift Part One on July 07, 2014
    (no rating)
    Will you please offer this book in other forms - PDF, read online, etc? That would most certainly assure (perhaps positive) reviews.
  • Tempting Fate on July 13, 2014

    Outstanding! I could not put this book down, and now that I've reached the end, I want more. I do hope that Saira and friends will find their way into my library once (or twice) more. Thank you for spinning a fine tale.
  • Slayer on July 19, 2014
    (no rating)
    Groan! I could not get past page 17. Please go back to school and try to pass your English courses - all of them.
  • The Lifestone Chronicles. Foundation of a Kings Legend on Sep. 30, 2014

    A wonderful story. However it is difficult to read because there are too many spelling errors, as well as incorrect word usage. Run it by an editor and it will be in top shape after.
  • The Road to Amber on Oct. 18, 2014

    Wow! The story is intriguing, but I had a difficult time with the level of suffering. Characters are well-developed. Overall, a very good tale.
  • Thomas Kindercook and the Pink Pyjamas on Jan. 14, 2015

    Love this story - a good mix of adventure, romance, humor and suspense. The characters are well-developed and believable. i enjoyed a few laugh-out-loud momemts. Cannot wait for the rest of the series. Welll done!
  • Out of Mischief: World of Change Book 1 on Jan. 28, 2015

    I really enjoyed the story. The characters are likeable and the story unfolds quite nicely. I have to agree with my fellow reader - a little more emotion would be nice. Overall, it was a good read and I look forward to the next installment(s).
  • Into Trouble: World of Change Book 2 on Jan. 30, 2015

    Bravo! Very well done. Once again, I truly enjoyed the characters and story line. I am looking forward to the future adventures of Aleria.
  • Burnt (Blood and Fire Book 1) on May 06, 2015

    I do not usually read dark fantasy, but this has captured my interest and imagination. The characters are believable and the story line realistic. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.
  • A Rose Amongst the Dragons: Book I on May 18, 2015

    The story has promise, but there are too many spelling and word usage errors - extensive editing needed. Also, the characters are underdeveloped and appear juvenile. Good attempt, but needs more work.
  • The Seventh Circle - Book I on June 19, 2015

    The story is a bit slow - certainly nowhere close to Tolkien's works. The "heroes" need to work together, not run and hide during times of difficulty or duress. I have read stories that draw you in and keep you wanting more. This is not one.
  • The Seventh Circle - Book II The Rhythm of Nature on June 20, 2015

    Well, I thought that this secon book would be an improvement on the first, but I am sadly disappointed. Grammatical errors, too much repetition, wrong word usage - just to name a few problems. I kept waiting for the story to pick up speed and the characters to develop some backbone but got to the end wondering why I wasted money and time on this. Sorry, but much improvement is needed.
  • Guardian of Maradon on Sep. 09, 2015

    A very sweet tale. The characters are believable and everything flows smoothly. I wanted it to continue, feeling that it ended too soon.
  • Chronicles of Den'dra: A Land Torn on Sep. 11, 2015

    In one word: magnificent! A thoroughly enjoyable read that leaves me wanting more. It is stories like this that separate the truly gifted writer from others. Bravo, and keep sharing your talent with the world!
  • Guardians of the Light (Book One of The Nebril Riverland Chronicles) on Oct. 20, 2015

    Love this story! I cannot wait for the next book. Keep writing, dear lady - your characters are strong and real and I find my imagination soaring right along with them.
  • Breathless (Circle of Light Book 1) on Oct. 23, 2015

    Good story. I like the characters and theme. I hope that you will offer book 2 on Smashwords soon. Congratulations.
  • Skull of Oghren on Oct. 27, 2015

    Good story: I like the characters and premise. However, many spelling / word usage issues need to be corrected. A good effort. Perhaps book 2 will be stronger and I look forward to the improvements. Keep trying.
  • The Flames of Deception - A Horizon of Storms: Book 1 on Dec. 30, 2015

    In one word - excellent! A thoroughly enjoyable read from beginning to end, with good, strong characters. I hope book 2 is released soon. Congratulations.
  • Thrum on Jan. 14, 2016

    An enjoyable, easy, entertaining story. Good humor and characters. I hope to see more of them in the future.
  • The Shadow of Black Rock on Jan. 20, 2016

    Nice story, but it moves a bit slowly. Proper names are used too often from one sentence to the next, when pronouns would have sufficed. However, a very good effort.
  • Darkmage on Jan. 27, 2016

    Keeping the tradition of the great epic alive is truly a gift. Thank you for sharing it with the world. Bravo!
  • The Stolen Child on Feb. 02, 2016

    Love it! I cannot wait for the next book - keep them coming.
  • Mountains of Mischief: World of Change Book 3 on Feb. 04, 2016

    Once again, you have outdone yourself. Bravo! I cannot wait for the next book.
  • Daygo's Fury on Feb. 17, 2016

    Very good start to an epic tale. I look forward to the continuation of the series. Well done!
  • The Shrine of Arthis Book One: The Power of Denial on Feb. 19, 2016

    I enjoyed this book from beginning to end and cannot wait for the second to be offered on Smashwords. Very well done!
  • Enhancers' Campaign on March 08, 2016

    The story is interesting and the characters strong. However, it does not move as expected -- a bit slow and uninspiring. A good effort though.
  • Roland's Castle on March 24, 2016

    As children's stories go - this is lovely. Highly entertaining and very funny. I felt as if I were 10 again.
  • Emily's Saga on April 18, 2016

    A truly epic tale. I enjoyed the books from start to finish. Yes, a few technical problems, but they do not diminish the great storytelling. Keep sharing your gift with the world. Cheers!
  • The Immortal Stars - Discoveries on April 19, 2016

    This story is in need of major editing - too many spelling/word usage errors. The plot needs some strengthening. The characters seem formed out of a teenager's mind. Maybe the author should take a few courses in writing? Two stars for bravery.
  • Hollo: The Gatecaster's Apprentice on April 21, 2016

    An enjoyable story from start to finish - a tale that brings you back to the innocence of childhood. I hope you keep charming us with your unique take on fantasy.
  • Fractal Saga: Timeless Fracture on May 03, 2016

    A very good story, with characters that are strong and believable. I certainly cannot wait for the next installment. Congratulations!
  • Where Serpents Strike (Children of the Falls Vol. 1) on May 15, 2016

    Wow! What a roller coaster ride!! Despite some spelling and word usage errors, this story is gripping and thoroughly enjoyable. I could not put it down. Bravo.
  • Where Evil Abides (Children of the Falls Vol. 2) on May 15, 2016

    The remarkable adventure continues. Once again, I could not put the book down. Needs editing for spelling/word usage, but the story is strong enough that they do not detract from it. I cannot wait for the next installment.
  • The Winds of Crowns and Wolves on May 18, 2016

    Ok, I am half way through and cannot continue. Eloquence is a gift - it cannot be had from a thesaurus. You are trying too hard and using too many words out of context and it is exhausting, to say the least. Keep it simple and find an editor.
  • Hope's Awakening on May 18, 2016
    (no rating)
    Just way too much sex. If you remove the encounters, this book would be reduced to a short story. You should reclassify it under Erotica.
  • Gareth and the Lost Island on June 02, 2016

    Love it! I have not laughed this much in ages. A highly entertaining story with memorable characters. I cannot wait for more of Gareth and company.
  • Dream of Embers Book 1 on June 05, 2016

    A very enjoyable tale with strong characters. I could not put it down and am waiting impatiently for the next installment. Congratulations!
  • Shades of Valhalla - Inner Origins Book One on June 23, 2016

    I guess it is fine for a teenager, but not so entertaining for an adult. Too much angst, and mood swings that make no sense. Holes in the story need filling, and the usual spelling/words usage issues.
  • The False Martyr on June 29, 2016

    You've done it once again! This is another book that keeps you reading well past your normal bedtime. I love the characters and the twists and turns that this story takes. Please do not make us wait too long for the next installment.
  • Raven's Hand on July 11, 2016

    Love it! I cannot wait for the next book in the series. A fast-paced ride from start to end. Congratulations!!
  • Beyond The Hero's Chamber on July 15, 2016

    Wonderful! Life is indeed one endless lesson. I love your perspective on creation. This story is very well-written, full of wisdom and comes from a place of love. Bravo!!
  • Children of the Sun and Moon on Aug. 14, 2016

    A very good tale. There are a few grammatical errors, but they do not detract from my enjoyment. I will certainly continue with the series.
  • A Tale of Mist and Shadow on Aug. 18, 2016

    I absolutely love this story. The characters are believable and they work very well together. I hope there will be more in the series (and soon)!
  • Clan of Redemption on Aug. 25, 2016

    The only reason I read this through to the end was the promise of a good tale. And it was a good tale, but it needs a thorough edit. Every page is full of spelling and word usage errors. Rework and relist it.
  • The Chosen (The Compendium of Raath, Book 1) on Sep. 13, 2016

    I love this story and cannot wait for the next installment. Great characters and a few unexpected turns - all the ingredients for a great adventure. Keep them coming!
  • The Shrinking Nuts Case on Sep. 15, 2016

    What a funny, exciting story! I love the characters and enjoyed the roller coaster ride. Bravo!!
  • Ethan Templeton and the All-Seeing Eye on Sep. 19, 2016

    Ok, deep breath - this needs a complete rework. I simply cannot continue reading a story where everything is written in the present tense. Word usage, spelling, grammar issues abound. Take writing classes and find an editor. 1 star for bravery.
  • The Gantean on Sep. 21, 2016

    I love this tale and wish you would offer the other two books on Smashwords. I would pay to read them here - just based on how good this first book is!
  • Green Jack on Sep. 26, 2016

    A truly fascinating and enjoyable tale. I would love the adventure to continue.