No Place Like Amestraton
on Feb. 15, 2013
This is one of the most boring stories I have ever read. I think many details could have been omitted. The characters are not fully developed and come across as quite stupid, for want of a better word. I read it through hoping it would finally develop into an exciting, entertaining story, but was sorely disappointed. Needs to be reworked.
Anaxiunara (One Brief Eternity)
on Feb. 28, 2013
Marvelous! Truly a gifted storyteller. Thank you for the spiritual, philosophical and emotional (not forgetting fantastical) journey. I hope that you write more about Anna and everyone else.
The Unsuspecting Mage: The Morcyth Saga Book One
on Aug. 28, 2013
I have to agree with my fellow reviewers - the book lacks tension and the present tense is very difficult to follow. I think that the use of the present tense takes away any depth, rendering the story flat. I certainly would not pay money to read the remaining volumes.
The Well of Fates
on Feb. 26, 2014
Fabulous! Another great storyteller is born. I cannot wait for the next book(s). Please hurry!!
Illiom, Daughter of Prophecy
on April 22, 2014
A very well-written tale with believable characters. You are a gifted story teller and I cannot wait for the adventure to continue. Well done!
Storm of Prophecy, Book I: Dark Awakening
on May 06, 2014
A good attempt. The characters need to be fine tuned and the story needs to flow more smoothly. I felt myself becoming irritated with the utter stupidity of most characters - perhaps the author attempted to portray them as complacent, but they unfortunately did not come across as such.
Bound by a Dragon
on May 08, 2014
A sweet romance. The characters are believable and although the story follows the standard "romance" formula, it is very enjoyable and easy to read. I cannot wait to read more about Keira, Aaron and Anna.
A Woman Warrior Born
on July 01, 2014
In one word, excellent! I cannot wait for more of Breea. One of the few books that I just cannot put down. Bravo!!
Blood Gift Part One
on July 07, 2014
Will you please offer this book in other forms - PDF, read online, etc? That would most certainly assure (perhaps positive) reviews.
on July 13, 2014
Outstanding! I could not put this book down, and now that I've reached the end, I want more. I do hope that Saira and friends will find their way into my library once (or twice) more. Thank you for spinning a fine tale.
on July 19, 2014
Groan! I could not get past page 17. Please go back to school and try to pass your English courses - all of them.
The Road to Amber
on Oct. 18, 2014
Wow! The story is intriguing, but I had a difficult time with the level of suffering. Characters are well-developed. Overall, a very good tale.
on Oct. 21, 2014
Magnificent! I could not put this story down. Please wrote a follow-up to this. I think the world needs to know more of Mol and the others. You are truly a gifted writer and should continue to share your talent.
Thomas Kindercook and the Pink Pyjamas
on Jan. 14, 2015
Love this story - a good mix of adventure, romance, humor and suspense. The characters are well-developed and believable. i enjoyed a few laugh-out-loud momemts. Cannot wait for the rest of the series. Welll done!
Out of Mischief: World of Change Book 1
on Jan. 28, 2015
I really enjoyed the story. The characters are likeable and the story unfolds quite nicely. I have to agree with my fellow reader - a little more emotion would be nice. Overall, it was a good read and I look forward to the next installment(s).
Into Trouble: World of Change Book 2
on Jan. 30, 2015
Bravo! Very well done. Once again, I truly enjoyed the characters and story line. I am looking forward to the future adventures of Aleria.
A Rose Amongst the Dragons: Book I
on May 18, 2015
The story has promise, but there are too many spelling and word usage errors - extensive editing needed. Also, the characters are underdeveloped and appear juvenile. Good attempt, but needs more work.
The Seventh Circle - Book I
on June 19, 2015
The story is a bit slow - certainly nowhere close to Tolkien's works. The "heroes" need to work together, not run and hide during times of difficulty or duress. I have read stories that draw you in and keep you wanting more. This is not one.
The Seventh Circle - Book II The Rhythm of Nature
on June 20, 2015
Well, I thought that this secon book would be an improvement on the first, but I am sadly disappointed. Grammatical errors, too much repetition, wrong word usage - just to name a few problems. I kept waiting for the story to pick up speed and the characters to develop some backbone but got to the end wondering why I wasted money and time on this. Sorry, but much improvement is needed.
Guardian of Maradon
on Sep. 09, 2015
A very sweet tale. The characters are believable and everything flows smoothly. I wanted it to continue, feeling that it ended too soon.
Chronicles of Den'dra: A Land Torn
on Sep. 11, 2015
In one word: magnificent! A thoroughly enjoyable read that leaves me wanting more. It is stories like this that separate the truly gifted writer from others. Bravo, and keep sharing your talent with the world!
Skull of Oghren
on Oct. 27, 2015
Good story: I like the characters and premise. However, many spelling / word usage issues need to be corrected. A good effort. Perhaps book 2 will be stronger and I look forward to the improvements. Keep trying.
on Jan. 14, 2016
An enjoyable, easy, entertaining story. Good humor and characters. I hope to see more of them in the future.
The Shadow of Black Rock
on Jan. 20, 2016
Nice story, but it moves a bit slowly. Proper names are used too often from one sentence to the next, when pronouns would have sufficed. However, a very good effort.
The Stolen Child
on Feb. 02, 2016
Love it! I cannot wait for the next book - keep them coming.
on March 24, 2016
As children's stories go - this is lovely. Highly entertaining and very funny. I felt as if I were 10 again.
on April 18, 2016
A truly epic tale. I enjoyed the books from start to finish. Yes, a few technical problems, but they do not diminish the great storytelling.
Keep sharing your gift with the world. Cheers!
The Immortal Stars - Discoveries
on April 19, 2016
This story is in need of major editing - too many spelling/word usage errors. The plot needs some strengthening. The characters seem formed out of a teenager's mind. Maybe the author should take a few courses in writing? Two stars for bravery.
Hollo (The Magic of Thedes, Book 1)
on April 21, 2016
An enjoyable story from start to finish - a tale that brings you back to the innocence of childhood. I hope you keep charming us with your unique take on fantasy.
Fractal Saga: Timeless Fracture
on May 03, 2016
A very good story, with characters that are strong and believable. I certainly cannot wait for the next installment. Congratulations!
Where Evil Abides (Children of the Falls Vol. 2)
on May 15, 2016
The remarkable adventure continues. Once again, I could not put the book down. Needs editing for spelling/word usage, but the story is strong enough that they do not detract from it. I cannot wait for the next installment.
The Winds of Crowns and Wolves
on May 18, 2016
Ok, I am half way through and cannot continue. Eloquence is a gift - it cannot be had from a thesaurus. You are trying too hard and using too many words out of context and it is exhausting, to say the least. Keep it simple and find an editor.
on May 18, 2016
Just way too much sex. If you remove the encounters, this book would be reduced to a short story. You should reclassify it under Erotica.
Dream of Embers Book 1
on June 05, 2016
A very enjoyable tale with strong characters. I could not put it down and am waiting impatiently for the next installment. Congratulations!
Shades of Valhalla - Inner Origins Book One
on June 23, 2016
I guess it is fine for a teenager, but not so entertaining for an adult. Too much angst, and mood swings that make no sense. Holes in the story need filling, and the usual spelling/words usage issues.
on July 11, 2016
Love it! I cannot wait for the next book in the series. A fast-paced ride from start to end. Congratulations!!
Beyond The Hero's Chamber
on July 15, 2016
Wonderful! Life is indeed one endless lesson. I love your perspective on creation. This story is very well-written, full of wisdom and comes from a place of love. Bravo!!
Children of the Sun and Moon
on Aug. 14, 2016
A very good tale. There are a few grammatical errors, but they do not detract from my enjoyment. I will certainly continue with the series.
Clan of Redemption
on Aug. 25, 2016
The only reason I read this through to the end was the promise of a good tale. And it was a good tale, but it needs a thorough edit. Every page is full of spelling and word usage errors. Rework and relist it.
The Chosen (The Compendium of Raath, Book 1)
on Sep. 13, 2016
I love this story and cannot wait for the next installment. Great characters and a few unexpected turns - all the ingredients for a great adventure. Keep them coming!
The Shrinking Nuts Case
on Sep. 15, 2016
What a funny, exciting story! I love the characters and enjoyed the roller coaster ride. Bravo!!
Ethan Templeton and the All-Seeing Eye
on Sep. 19, 2016
Ok, deep breath - this needs a complete rework. I simply cannot continue reading a story where everything is written in the present tense. Word usage, spelling, grammar issues abound. Take writing classes and find an editor. 1 star for bravery.
on Sep. 21, 2016
I love this tale and wish you would offer the other two books on Smashwords. I would pay to read them here - just based on how good this first book is!
James and the Changing Red
on Oct. 28, 2016
The story shows promise, but the innumerable spelling and grammar issues need attention. It is fragmented as well and characters are just annoying. Rework thoroughly and re-post.
Fantastica: The Journey
on Oct. 29, 2016
A good story - quite humorous at times. It is a shame that a whole scene was taken right out the author's other book and deposited here. A few spelling errors, but enough to turn one away from the tale.
Sky Road Walker
on Nov. 10, 2016
Loved this story from beginning to end. It feels strange to not have it continue, but I think that is what a great tale does to us - leaves us wanting more. Well done.
A Quest of Heroes (Book #1 in the Sorcerer's Ring)
on Nov. 17, 2016
This tale grabbed my attention from the onset and I had to stay up to finish reading it. I was about to buy the next book in the series but am wavering based on the reviews. The author is truly talented.
Dream of Embers Book 2
on Jan. 02, 2017
Once again, the author has outdone himself. I cannot wait for book three.
The Children of Isador
on March 04, 2017
What an absolutely enjoyable adventure! I love the characters and storyline. There are a few spelling and word usage errors, but they did not detract from my enjoyment in any way. I hope to hear more from Isador in the future.
Cursed: Legend of the Grimoire, Book One
on March 19, 2017
What a wonderful adventure! I love the characters -- with all their faults. Some unexpected twists and turns, but it all comes together perfectly.
A Whispered Wish
on March 28, 2017
Right off the top - please stop writing in only present tense. I could not get past the second sentence. This is not how a story is told.
on April 07, 2017
I did not read the first novel, but this has enough background information to make it a stand-alone. I love the story and characters. My one problem - too much fashion and repetition of certain descriptive phrases. Also, there are some spelling errors, but not enough to take away from the story.
The Lines of Tamar
on April 13, 2017
In a word - wow! This is truly a story of epic proportions, filled with twists and turns that connect in the most wonderful way. Well done.
The Shields of Vale
on April 26, 2017
Unfortunately, this already reads like a first attempt without a spelling and grammar check. Please stop using only present tense - it is insulting to anyone with a brain. 2 stars for bravery.
Into The Realm
on May 16, 2017
.An enjoyable, if predictable, tale. Quite a number of spelling and grammar errors. A thorough editing is needed.
The Black and White Angel
on May 25, 2017
I have read half of this book and cannot continue. The story line is weak and characters monochromatic. I have waited for the "magic" that one usually feels in the first few pages, but it is sadly lacking after so trudging through so many.
Before the Tide
on May 30, 2017
This has the makings of a great tale, but for the numerous spelling errors. Review homophones, as well as synonyms for words ending in -ness. Vengeance sounds much better than vengefulness. I would give 5 stars if this were edited properly.
The Ring of Eman Vath
on July 08, 2017
This is what separates the boys from the men. Even with a few spelling errors, this story is, in a word - excellent. Bravo!
Caught in Amber
on July 16, 2017
A most unusual and entertaining tale - a breath of fresh air in its originality. A lesson in trusting and believing in one self.
on Oct. 18, 2017
Very nice story with good, strong characters. There are quite a few spelling and word usage errors, so a detailed edit is in order. Overall, an enjoyable read.
on Nov. 02, 2017
The story has promise, but too many spelling and word usage errors. With a thorough editing, it would be quite enjoyable.
on Nov. 29, 2017
A tribute to the other side of Divinity that has been suffocated by the dominance of the male image. Love the deep spiritual message skilfully woven into a great adventure. Well done!
The Emperor's Daughter
on Dec. 08, 2017
A wonderful story with good, strong characters. I cannot wait for the next installment. Well done!!
The Mirror of Worlds
on Jan. 10, 2018
Excellent first book. The characters are well-defined and the story is a stay-up-at-night-reading kind of adventure. I am impatiently waiting for the next installment. Congratulations!
Hidden in the Reed's - Home (Book 1)
on Jan. 16, 2018
Good story, strong characters. However, the plot did not quite come together at the end. I feel as if I missed something along the way.
A Daughter's Fury
on Feb. 20, 2018
Loved the story and characters, but have to take a point off for the many spelling and word usage errors. Give the story another edit and watch your homonyms and homophones.
on April 15, 2018
In one word - excellent. The author weaves a tale that kept me reading late into the night. The characters are strong and believable and draws one into the story, making it hard to accept the end of such an enjoyable adventure.
The Black Lily
on May 14, 2018
A very enjoyable read. There are a few spelling errors, but not enough to take away from a solid tale. I am looking forward to book 2. Well done.
The Black Pearl
on May 28, 2018
In a word - wow! It has been a while since I have been unable to put a book down. I love the cast of characters and lived their trials and tribulations with them. I cannot wait to start on the second book. Bravo!!
Dark Magic Rising -The Sisterhood Trilogy Book One
on June 02, 2018
This is a fine story, but not the type that kept me up late. I kept waiting for the excitement that usually begins on the first few pages of a great story, but it just never came. I will certainly not spend more time on other books of this series.
on July 30, 2018
I had a smile on my face the whole time I read this story. Lovable characters and great humor. Thank you.
on Aug. 05, 2018
How refreshing and thoroughly enjoyable. I loved the characters - both good and bad. Good that I started this book on a Friday evening, because I could not put it down all weekend. It is now 5:30pm on Sunday and I can finally do so. Bravo!!
Xander's Essence - Part One
on Aug. 10, 2018
Good story, but the constant use of names instead of pronouns is a bit much. There is a problem with flow - it feels choppy at times. Overall, a good effort.
The Guardian and the Thief
on Sep. 12, 2018
I loved this book from the start! The author weaves a grand tale that gets even better in the second book. Well done.
The Dragon and the Queen
on Sep. 12, 2018
I am so glad to have bought both volumes at the same time, because I could not wait to see the outcome. This was a wonderful tale and a great success, as first attempts go. Keep writing!
on Sep. 21, 2018
I simply cannot tolerate the use of only the present tense. This may be a great tale in the making, but I simply feel ill after the prologue. Please apply correct usage and try again.