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Member Since: Dec. 26, 2013

LMLC

Trouble on Dec. 26, 2013

I had a hard time getting through this book for several reasons, but I did read through to be able to be write a review. First thing that I found annoying was many errors in spelling, word usage, and punctuation. The author never spelled the word "too" correctly. There were also a lot of places where commas and periods were needed to clarify sentences. Another thing was that from the description and some of the book, I was expecting Samantha to be more conservative in her morals. She was foul mouthed and selfish. She put her sexual escapades before her son and family. I also did not expect such explicit sex scenes. I found myself disliking Samantha and Ben more as the book went on. They never communicated well and of course this became a point of conflict multiple times. I guess maybe it was supposed to add to the plot, but it was just annoying to me. The plot was interesting with Samantha having such a difficult ordeal in her past, and with having the problems of the past come back and having to deal with it. I would have preferred a little more of development of the problems and how they were dealt with, both in the case of the pasts of Samantha and Ben.