Unfortunately, I didn't much care for this one. I'll be honest: I didn't like Kody at all, and that accounts for a lot with me. The writing was okay, though Kody seemed more than a little wishy-washy, and I think the writing suffered for it. "No, I'm too shy," "Sure I'll come over," "No, I'm too shy," etc. The result was yo-yo-ey, and I didn't like the feeling.
The technical quality was par for the course here. The flow was a bit awkward in a few places, but the story and dialog were fairly strong (aside from the wishy-washiness, which was due to the character more than anything, I think), but all in all, pretty good.