Marie Dalton

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Smashwords book reviews by Marie Dalton

  • Nomads of the Gods on Aug. 26, 2013

    Great story so far. As others have reported, there some wrong words used, but I can get over that. Great imagination. Love it. Keep up the good work Gary.
  • Dawn of the Valiant (The Valerious Chronicles: Book One) on June 22, 2014

    Great book. I will be very happy to get the next book to continue the story and see what happens next. Great author.
  • Sword of the Gods: The Chosen One on April 28, 2015

    Loved this book. Character development is good. Would make a great movie. Have read the entire series thus far and can hardly wait for book 4. This series has been edited well and doesn't have the grammatical errors that I am used to seeing in books from smashwords. Would highly recommend this book. Loved the length, it lets you really get into the characters.
  • 14 Stones on June 26, 2015

    A very good read. Well edited. Looking forward to the next book. Given the era the story takes place, 14 years would be almost middle aged, so I can believe in the story. Keep up the great work Paul. Thank you.
  • Apollyon's Saint The Collection: Books One through Ten on July 28, 2015

    It took quite a while to get into the book, but it's a good story. The editing is almost non existent. It's so full of errors it almost makes it hard to follow. The amount of grammatical errors are huge.
  • A Twist of the Tale on Sep. 26, 2016

    Loved the story. However it was very distracting when the author kept putting the wrong word in. The word was SORT instead of SOUGHT. There were a few times that the sentences were incorrectly written, but I put up with it because it was a great story. I love the fact that it was epic length, it lets you get so much more out of the story. Every author should use a grammar checker to make sure of the sentence structure. Keep putting books out, they're great and you are a great story teller.
  • Heir of Oak on Jan. 21, 2017

    Great read. Good character development. A few grammatical errors, but easy to read. Hard to put down. Waiting for the next book. Good job Trisha.
  • The Deeps (Book Three of The Liminality) on Feb. 23, 2017

    This is a great series. The grammar needs help, words missing, incorrect words on occasion. But it's really very good. The first book was difficult to get into/ but as I have read this author before, I knew it would be worth it. And I was right. Would recommend this to everyone.
  • Nomads The Risen God on July 04, 2017

    I just love this series. I just wish that who ever did the editing on these books would use a grammar checker. There are s many errors in it, it makes me crazy. But even with all the grammatical errors, I still love the books. I will be very sorry to have to story end. Maybe Mr. Lee will continue the story. There are surely other stories..(hint, hint) I had to take one star off for all the errors, otherwise would have been five stars.
  • The Queen of Mages on Aug. 22, 2017

    A very good story. The magic was very different from what other authors have done making it truly unique. Like many others, I am a grammar snob, but surprisingly didn't have many issues in this book. Loved the characters, they were more like real people. You know, unsure of some of the issues in their lives. Loved the book. Waiting for the next in this series. Thank you Mr. Clayborne for the wonderful read.
  • Ferryl Shayde on Oct. 20, 2018

    Very good story. Will definitely read the next book in the series. It took a little bit to get into the story. But once it takes you, you have to finish to find out what happens. Only a few mistakes, words missing or such, but not many. Made it a pleasure to read.
  • Advent of Silver on Jan. 09, 2019

    I'm not far into the book but I can say it is desperate need of editing. Please use a grammar editor as well. It's a good story but hard to read. It seems that English is a second language for this author. But as I said, it does have a good story, the characters are developing nicely. But it's in need of editing.