I wish I had previewed this book before buying it. The story plot is very good, the writing is not. There are long narratives, paragraphs and sentences that are hard to navigate. The history reads like a text. The author could greatly improve her story by using more dialogue and less telling. Also, reading the story aloud or having someone else do so before publishing might help catch grammatical and punctuation errors. I was very disappointed in the writing style, but loved the plot. $5.99 was too much to pay for this book.