A group of young 20-something survivors are going about their normal lives when a zombie breakout happens in Reno, Nevada. The lucky die fast. The survivors must struggle to survive in this new world. Will the group make it to safety?
I thought this story was very sweet. My only problem with it is that the quotations need to be separated out so that the reader knows who is talking at what time.
Also, maybe instead of skipping to "three years later", summarize what happened in the meantime, because it seems like the story had a bit of a gap in it.