A friend gifted this to me over the weekend and I've read it over the past week or so. Couldn't stop laughing at the situations Mike finds himself in. I feel like it's mostly been said so I'll just say give this one a try. You won't be disappointed.
I disagree that this is a 2 star story, granted there are a few grammativcal things but its not Shakespeare we're judging here. It's a simple little story that does its job, shows a sexy situation between some hot girls.
Definitely liking these 'short shorts' hehe. My fave stories are 'Moving on, moving in' and 'playing games.' There's more than just sexy erotica at play here, there's interesting stories, decent characters and humor as well to keep you interested as the action heats up. Definitely recommending this one.
A great follow up to the original stories, Each one is unique and plays out to a satisfying, interesting conclusion. By no means run-of-the-mill or by-the-numbers, Summers constructs stories which are fun, sexy and unique in the way they are told.
Good advice and the fact is that anyone can say advice is 'contradictory' but I think it comes from a good place, someone wanting to help others and really how critical can you be of good advice given for free? Eh Darcy and Aussiescribbler? If people like you keep trashing people's hard work then who's going to want to write anything on Smashwords free or not? P.S. in case you haven't guessed... I. HATE. TROLLS.