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'The Love Machine' is a very well-written novella.
Because the story did not take place in a 'futuristic' setting I found it difficult to believe that two people could make such a complex machine. Though the writing was so strong that the implausibility of the AI didn't concern me very much.
I enjoyed this book. There's lots of interesting facts in it.
Just a correction: The full name of the band mentioned in fact 57 is Black Sabbath. The picture you've used is the cover of Coven's Witchcraft Destroys Minds and Reaps Souls.
The two bands have similarities (song titled Black Sabbath, member named Oz Osborne/ Ozzy Osbourne) but are two different bands.