It took me two tries to read this book. I really don't like to start a book and not finish it. Too much babbling it gets very confusing. Megan has a good heart but crystal to much for me. Not enough details I like to build the scenes in my mind from the details I'm given. You wrote over a hundred thousand words and all of this takes place within one weeks time. I love the character growth Megan and Lucien both change throughout the book. Next time give more intense and detailed fight scenes Lucien was hurt badly during the first battle with the bat creatures and Megan had no clue. Get a writing circle friends who love reading paranormal who will be brutally honest with you and finally. TRY AGAIN!!!