Horny Devil
on May 23, 2012
A good read, but it was a bit confusing at first when the story focus went from second person to third person.
As for Ernest's concern about the "young ones" I had no difficulty understanding what the author referred to as they were mentioned earlier in the story.
Other than one or two typos the scene is well written and the imagery is very vivid. Well done.
Amulet
on Aug. 08, 2012
Very well written - great back-story, strong character development. A few minor typos that could use correction, but overall a fantastic read.