The writing wasn't great at times. It was however a rough and ready story. Emme was a bit of an interesting character and you get some sense of the kind of person she is. The sex scene was the best part of an ok story.
The story from Addison's perspective worked well. Her character seemed a little uncertain. At times she seemed pathetic and other times pretty dirty. I would imagine the later stories would sort that out. The tension between the characters was good.
A good start to a continuing storyline. There were some odd shifts between medical names and much less technical sections of description. Some good sex and Dirk has amazing eyesight when it comes to panties.