Praise is always a good things for newly published works to encourage the author to keep writing.
This deserves a lot of praise. I have already fell in love with Lola and even playboy James. Most short stories don't give me time to really get a feel for a character and yet yours gave me a feel for two and continued to get me aching for the next book with that teaser. I can't wait for Vice, Virtue & Video. And since you said it was a novel to the Vice & Virtue short I'm expecting something long.
Again, fabulous writing and funny, energetic story-line.
I like how this isn't just another erotica (I'm so tired of reading BDSM but the way it plays out here is appealing and humorous) and Lola and James were able to keep things platonic throughout High School and College.... A lot of books start out with best friends never being attracted to each other and nearly 3 chapters later they are in each others pants. The pacing is great. Dying for Vice, Virtue & Video!