Interesting premise. Good plot. Needs lots of editing for grammar, spelling, word choice. Dialog could use some work.
Side note: at the end of this book is a page or two of what appears to be some sort of scholarly or technical writing. THAT portion is very well written. Perhaps this author is trying to move from non-fiction to fiction. If so, she needs some polish!
Very entertaining. If you like fantasy/romance this is a great read. Very interesting characters and a little twist on the typical fantasy "types". Looking forward to the next novel. Most impressive copy editing--congratulations to this indie writer. Not everyone is so careful. If the series keeps going as well as it is, I will likely upgrade to 5 stars. 4 stars is, "I really liked it and would be happy to read it again." 5 stars is, "This book is going into my library to read over and over again."