Excellent Writing. Great Characterizations. Very well thought out dialogue. Great mix of vulnerabilities and superpowers. I don't normally buy fiction online - but I bought this one and was glad to read it.
I didn't quite get the point of the email like exchanges that seem to be talking about the books - maybe i don't have the history of the 'show' - that was the only annoying part.
Great Story. Incredibly detailed. Character development is full and believable. The larger context, including history of the place and relationships between people, is also very well developed and well observed for the kind of emotional detail that fleshes out characters in the book. I had a hard time envisioning the actual universe, however, where gravity, and atmosphere were so fluid. For me that was a drawback, and I can't think of any published sic-fi work that I've read that that requires this much envisioning and faith from the reader - perhaps this is the reason this book wasn't bought by a publisher. Still, I am looking forward to reading a sequel.