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  • Incestuous Desires on June 04, 2016

    The title promises, the book delivers. This might be my favorite incest story ever. No exaggeration. This author may have the most ridiculous pen-name, but is becoming my favorite author. Having grown-up 'reading' porn-mags like Playboy & Penthouse, along with Gent, Juggs and more, this story brought so many great memories. I wish I had the nerve to do what David does, hook-up with his hot, big-titted mom. Damn, that's hot!
  • Sins Of The Son on June 04, 2016

    Judge this book by its cover. The graphic artist spent extra time creating this book's cover, reflecting how the author spent extra effort crafting this long, well-planned, intriguing story. Instead of chapters, the book contains seven 'booklets', each progressing and building upon the last. They easily flow from the last one, into the next one. Upon its end, I'm so glad that after reading so much story, and so much sex, there is a true conclusion. Unlike too many writers, this author gives us an ending to the story--to other writers, the climax is not the conclusion! Even better, the ending will make you question everything that's occurred and wonder what the characters' motivations truly are. You will want to re-read this book, beyond re-experiencing all the sex. I think there's about ten sexual encounters. Re-reading it, you'll discover new things about John, the son and Lilith, the mother, along with the priest and other minor characters. The pacing and flow of the storyline is such that the sex sets-up the plot as much as the plot sets-up the sex. This writer has the skill to describe a sexual encounter in such vivid detail. If a picture is worth a thousand words, then this writer uses five-thousand words to paint us a picture of the sex act that's occurring. Reading the written-length of the book's sexual encounters gives a sense of the time the sex act took to occur. With the sex acts multiple pages long, there's a real-world passage of time reading them translating to the illusion of time in the story. The part where Son and Mother have sex in public while at the mall is one of the hottest incest encounters I've ever read. The idea of using Catholic Confession is a novel one. Written in the first-person, it creates a dimension of intimacy. Instead of the narrator telling us of his conquests, we're eavesdropping on his extremely graphic and detailed confessions. Or, is John confessing his sins to us? Although sometimes heavy-handed, it adds another level to this story, elevating it from just another erotic incest story to an Erotic Novel. It also explains why this book is also listed under, Paranormal. There's no vampires, werewolves, ghosts or goblins. Instead, with the religious symbolism, there's enough hinting to leave the reader wondering if there's more happening between the lines; or you can ignore all that and enjoy all the mother-son loving. The story begins very straightforward, but takes many turns upon the son's second confession. Just like the model on the cover, Lilith is hot, dangerous, and potentially crazy, which makes her even more desirable; and as her son discovers, after that first taste, Lilith is irresistible. Differing from her other book's, this is another great mother-son book by Dinkleberry.