It was pleasure reading your book. It felt like hearing a very contemporary story with a style of victorian writer as the elaboration and explanation part of each chapter is extensive and draws a scenic sensation in front of the eyes while reading. I also liked the characterisation of each of the persons in the story. Starting from names to their attire, education details, occupation, work, background, and personal habits;it seems they are fetched from the day to day world.I really liked the character of Jim Andrews. I liked self confidence of Maggie and the way she carries herself but i did not like her last move in the story. I liked Lily too as she is like a living commodity moving from one place to another. Overall the impact of fiction is good and it takes unique turns from time to time. Setting up in simple household,moving to luxurious office and labs to beautiful ocean, symbolises the writer's bandwidth of understanding the human nature and symbolising the ups and downs of life. The scintific details embedded in the story are enormous, deep and good. The story line is graphical as it starts from basic but arouses the curiosity level a lot as the chapters are moving. I am personally very impressed and happily spent my weekend reading this. It is a memorable experience reading this book.
Congratulations and I really look forward to the next addition of the series.I will like to know more about Jim and Maggie's and other associates next moves and story. The end part is appropriate as it will keep readers like me thinking 'what next?'