Sorry had to delete my previous review. It was full of typos. Just wanted to write that you're off to a great start. The story sounds very promising and the preview was very hot as always. Wishing you the best of luck!
This story is as awesome as when I first read it I noticed just a few minor changes which were for the better in my opinion. It's a cleaner version of one of your classics. I love the new character names, they seem very fitting to their characterization. I hope see more of my favorites on here!