Blush Erotica

Publisher info

I have been writing for a couple decades, but only started writing erotica about five years ago. I have created Blush Rose for my really hardcore stuff. I am also not politically correct, and I call 'em like I see 'em.

I will also begin publishing erotic stories from other up and coming writers under the name Blush Erotica. Visit my blog to find out more. Stay tuned!

Smashwords Interview

Why do you write about rape?
There are many reasons this is a topic I like to write about. Yes, I realize that many women have been raped, and they don't want to be reminded of it by reading about it. Well, there is a simple solution to that: DON'T READ IT! I'll never understand why women who are warned about a story's contents, read it and then complain about things they don't like. I warn people what is in my stories, so they have no one to blame but themselves. The main reason I write about rape is that many women do have rape fantasies. Not the kind where they are taken into a dark alley, humiliated and abused. No, they have fantasies about a handsome foreign prince forcing them against their will. No violence, no abuse, merely sex. I also write about rape, because it is considered a taboo topic, and I want to step out of my comfort zone and write about those types of topics. Again, if you don't like taboo topics, then don't read my stories. It really is that simple.
Will you really publish other authors' stories?
I'm definitely willing. I enjoy publishing my own stuff, and I would like to branch out and help other wanna be writers. It's not easy to know where to start, or who to trust. I won't require any private information, at least unless your stuff is popular and sells A LOT. For more information, visit my blog (address is on my profile page).
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Where to find Blush Erotica online


Where to buy in print


Publisher of



Hunter of Souls & River Runs Erotic Collection
Series: River Runs · Hunter of Souls. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 28,630. Language: English. Published: March 2, 2018 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Erotica Anthologies, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Two erotic stories in one: Persis is an immortal bounty hunter who claims souls that have gone dark, and River awakens in a Utopian future that isn't as it seems. For those at least 18 years of age. For those who want more of a sample, the first parts of both stories are available here for free.
River Runs: Book Three
Series: River Runs. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 7,580. Language: English. Published: December 28, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Science fiction » Utopias & dystopias
River awakens to a Utopian future. There is no more war or crime and everyone lives in peace. He meets Sofia, and they fall in love. Is this too good to be true? Sofia knows more than she's admitted, but what is she afraid of? Nothing is as it seems, and there is a high price to pay for freedom. Story has graphic sexual and adult situations and is for 18 and above. Third and final installment.
Rose and the Prince: Censored Edition
Series: Rose and the Prince. Price: $1.99 USD. Words: 35,570. Language: English. Published: December 23, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Romance » Adult
Rosemary's boyfriend leaves her for her best friend, leaving her heartbroken. Then one day in the park, a stranger drugs and abducts her. She awakens to a rough and cold new world, where she learns she is a slave. Will she ever be allowed to leave the harem which she now calls home? Contains edited questionable content. Only recommended for those at least 18.
Rose and the Prince: Book Three
Series: Rose and the Prince. Price: $1.49 USD. Words: 17,230. Language: English. Published: December 21, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Rosemary's boyfriend leaves her for her best friend, leaving her heartbroken. Then one day in the park, a stranger drugs and abducts her. She awakens to a rough and cold new world, where she learns she is a sex slave. Will she ever be allowed to leave the harem which she now calls home? Those with rape triggers, do not read, since there is non-consensual/forced sex. Only for those at least 18.
Rose and the Prince: Book Two
Series: Rose and the Prince. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 9,960. Language: English. Published: December 18, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Rosemary's boyfriend leaves her for her best friend, leaving her heartbroken. Then one day in the park, a stranger drugs and abducts her. She awakens to a rough and cold new world, where she learns she is a sex slave. Will she ever be allowed to leave the harem which she now calls home? Those with rape triggers, do not read, since there is non-consensual/forced sex. Only for those at least 18.
Rose and the Prince: Book One
Series: Rose and the Prince. Price: Free! Words: 10,470. Language: English. Published: December 16, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Contemporary
Rosemary's boyfriend leaves her for her best friend, leaving her heartbroken. Then one day in the park, a stranger drugs and abducts her. She awakens to a rough and cold new world, where she learns she is a sex slave. Will she ever be allowed to leave the harem which she now calls home? Those with rape triggers, do not read, since there is non-consensual/forced sex. Only for those at least 18.
Hunter of Souls: Book Two
Series: Hunter of Souls. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 6,200. Language: English. Published: November 19, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Persis is an immortal bounty hunter. She spends her nights claiming souls that have gone dark. One night she meets a mortal man and feels an immediate connection. She knows she should avoid him and stay focused on her job, but she is unable to keep her distance. Nothing is as it seems, and nothing will ever be the same again. For 18 and older only, since story has graphic sex and harsh language.
Hunter of Souls: Book One
Series: Hunter of Souls. Price: Free! Words: 8,100. Language: English. Published: November 18, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Paranormal, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Persis is an immortal bounty hunter. She spends her nights claiming souls that have gone dark. One night she meets a mortal man and feels an immediate connection. She knows she should avoid him and stay focused on her job, but she is unable to keep her distance. Nothing is as it seems, and nothing will ever be the same again. For 18 and older only, since story has graphic sex and harsh language.
River Runs: Book Two
Series: River Runs. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 3,720. Language: English. Published: February 18, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica, Fiction » Science fiction » Utopias & dystopias
River awakens to a Utopian future. There is no more war or crime and everyone lives in peace. He meets Sofia, and they fall in love. Is this too good to be true? Sofia knows more than she's admitted, but what is she afraid of? Nothing is as it seems, and there is a high price to pay for freedom. Story has graphic sexual situations for those at least 18. 2nd of 3 installments.
River Runs: Book One
Series: River Runs. Price: Free! Words: 3,120. Language: English. Published: February 18, 2017 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Science fiction » Utopias & dystopias, Fiction » Erotica » Sci-Fi Erotica
(5.00 from 1 review)
River awakens to a Utopian future. There is no more war or crime and everyone lives in peace. He meets Sofia, and they fall in love. Is this too good to be true? Sofia knows more than she's admitted, but what is she afraid of? Nothing is as it seems, and there is a high price to pay for freedom. Story has graphic sexual situations for those at least 18. 1st of 3 installments
Fallen Angel: Book Three
Series: Fallen Angel. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 5,620. Language: English. Published: June 17, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Cyn is a fallen angel who lost her wings in the cruelest way imaginable. She is convicted of a crime that she did not commit. Sart, the man who condemned her, decides he cannot banish her as proclaimed. He wants her to explain her innocence. Can she earn back her wings? Will she open up to him as fast as she opened her legs for him? Book three of an erotic thriller only suitable for 18 & above.
Fallen Angel: Book Two
Series: Fallen Angel. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 4,350. Language: English. Published: June 15, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Erotica » Romance
Cyn is a fallen angel who lost her wings in the cruelest way imaginable. She is convicted of a crime that she did not commit. Sart, the man who condemned her, decides he cannot banish her as proclaimed. He wants her to explain her innocence. Can she earn back her wings? Will she open up to him as fast as she opened her legs for him? Book two of an erotic thriller only suitable for 18 & above.
Fallen Angel: Book One
Series: Fallen Angel. Price: Free! Words: 3,400. Language: English. Published: June 14, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
(4.33 from 3 reviews)
Cyn is a fallen angel who lost her wings in the cruelest way imaginable. She is convicted of a crime that she did not commit. Sart, the man who condemned her, decides he cannot banish her as proclaimed. He wants her to explain her innocence. Can she earn back her wings? Will she open up to him as fast as she opened her legs for him? Book one of an erotic thriller only suitable for 18 & above.
Spicy & Brenna and the Beast Erotic Collection
Series: B&B · Spicy. Price: $3.99 USD. Words: 61,160. Language: English. Published: June 7, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Two erotic and kinky stories in one: Spicy and Brenna and the Beast. Only for those at least 18 years of age.
Blush Rose's BDSM collection: 15 Layers Trilogy, Tempting the Boss, Kinky Kitty Kept, Roni's Abduction
Series: 15 Layers · Kinky Kitty. Price: $3.49 USD. Words: 50,740. Language: English. Published: May 27, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Get all of Blush Rose's BDSM erotica in one collection. This ebook contains the entire trilogy of the 15 Layers books, which is a parody of 50 Shades of Grey, as well as her newest short Tempting the Boss. Also included are Kinky Kitty Kept & Roni's Abduction. For those open minded adults at least 18 years of age. Enjoy!
Tempting the Boss
Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 3,510. Language: English. Published: May 27, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Mandy wanted her boss, Mr. Metsok, the first time she smelled him. It didn't even occur to her that he might also want her until one day her arousal was too hot to subdue. But what could happen between them, since he was happily married and had never cheated on his wife? Erotic short story with mild BDSM aspects for only those over 18.
Spicy: Book Three
Series: Spicy. Price: $1.49 USD. Words: 11,080. Language: English. Published: May 13, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
(5.00 from 1 review)
Meg doesn't know how to handle Jeremy discovering the truth about her. He makes her promise to never go back to the club, but she is reminded of a promise she first made to her boss. Deciding to do one final performance turns out to be a mistake as her nightmarish past catches up with her.. Will Jeremy rescue her, and will she let him? Kinky and erotic, for adults 18 and over only.
Spicy: Book Two
Series: Spicy. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 7,270. Language: English. Published: May 10, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
(4.00 from 1 review)
Jeremy returns to the club and pays for the backroom. Spice opens up about her horrible past, and he is determined to help her. He brings her to new heights of passion, but she doesn't realize until it's too late that her disguise is compromised. Not wanting him to recognize her as his new designer, she runs away. But Jeremy follows her home. Erotic and kinky story only for those at least 18.
Spicy: Book One
Series: Spicy. Price: Free! Words: 7,230. Language: English. Published: May 9, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
(4.00 from 2 reviews)
Meg had a hard start in life. She creates Spice to finally call the shots on what men can and cannot do. Until Jeremy ends up paying for her time. He awakens things in her body, but can she give up control and let him call the shots? Especially after finding out he is her next big project at her real job? What will she do if he discovers who she really is? Erotic and kinky for adults over 18.
Brenna & the Beast: Book Three
Series: B&B. Price: $1.49 USD. Words: 13,060. Language: English. Published: April 29, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Brenna was raised with Leo, a hybrid experiment of human and animal, whom she loves with all her heart. Will they be able to get past their obvious differences and build a life together? Follow Brenna as she goes from an innocent girl to a highly sexual woman. This is part three of an erotic romance about a woman in love with a gentle man who is also a vicious animal and all that entails.
Brenna & the Beast: Book Two
Series: B&B. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 10,420. Language: English. Published: April 22, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Brenna was raised with Leo, a hybrid experiment of human and animal, whom she loves with all her heart. Will they be able to get past their obvious differences and build a life together? Follow Brenna as she goes from an innocent girl to a highly sexual woman. This is part two of an erotic romance about a woman in love with a gentle man who is also a vicious animal and all that entails.
Brenna & the Beast: Book One
Series: B&B. Price: Free! Words: 10,930. Language: English. Published: April 18, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Romance, Fiction » Romance » Erotic
Brenna was raised with Leo, a hybrid experiment of human and animal, whom she loves with all her heart. Will they be able to get past their obvious differences and build a life together? Follow Brenna as she goes from an innocent girl to a highly sexual woman. This is part one of an erotic romance about a woman in love with a gentle man who is also a vicious animal and all that entails.
Kinky Kitty Kept
Series: Kinky Kitty. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 6,840. Language: English. Published: February 7, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Kitty likes kinky sex but her boyfriend doesn't. Will she have the courage to tell him she needs more in the bedroom? What's a girl to do? This is the continuation of Kinky Kitty. Short erotic story involves BDSM and is not intended for anyone under the age of 18.
Roni's Abduction
Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 8,780. Language: English. Published: February 4, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
Roni gets lost on her way to visit a friend's new home. It gets late and she is forced to spend the night at an isolated motel in the middle of nowhere. Men invade her room, bind and abduct her. She soon learns their horrible plans and hopes for a miracle. Will her prayer be answered from one of her captors? Erotic story should not be read by those under 18.
15 Layers Trilogy
Series: 15 Layers. Price: $1.69 USD. Words: 31,710. Language: English. Published: January 21, 2015 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
15 Layers Trilogy started as 3 short ebooks and is an erotic BDSM parody of 50 Shades of Grey. They are put together in this one ebook to save on the purchase cost. Vidalia Tulips meets handsome, sexy and rich Artemis d'Onion, and he offers her a job as his personal assistant. But this isn't the typical job, and her duties are a bit more than she thinks she can handle.
Trudy's Former Coma Patient
Series: Trudy. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 2,430. Language: English. Published: July 20, 2014 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » General
Trudy's coma patient is now awake, but she fears facing him. Will she be punished for her previous actions? Deciding to face her fears. she goes back to the hospital, only to find a sex hungry man who merely wants a repeat performance. What will she do now? Erotic short story should only be read by those at least 18. This is the second part and should be read in order.
Trudy's Coma Patient
Series: Trudy. Price: Free! Words: 3,030. Language: English. Published: October 9, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Women's Erotica
Trudy reads to coma patients and then one day the man of her dreams gets admitted. She reads him a trashy novel and is surprised by his bodily response. Can she resist taking her urges too far? This erotic story is not suitable for anyone under the age of 18.
For the Love of Christian Grey, my 50 Shades
Price: Free! Words: 260. Language: English. Published: October 3, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Humor & comedy » Parody, Fiction » Poetry » Female authors
This is a short poem inspired by 50 Shades of Grey. It is a companion piece to my 15 Layers trilogy, which is also a parody of the 50 Shades trilogy. While it is a short poem (about 250 words), sexual references are used. Not appropriate for anyone under the age of 18.
15 Layers Fried
Series: 15 Layers, Book 3. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 9,890. Language: English. Published: September 15, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM, Fiction » Erotica » Comedy/Humor
In the third and final installment of the 15 Layers trilogy, Vidalia and Artemis reach a truce, and she continues working for him, deciding that maybe she can deal with his issues and still have great mind blowing sex. Then someone from the past threatens to destroy what they've built. Can these two live happily ever after? This story is erotic parody BDSM not meant for those under 18.
15 Layers Deeper
Series: 15 Layers, Book 2. Price: $0.99 USD. Words: 12,370. Language: English. Published: September 15, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM, Fiction » Erotica » Comedy/Humor
In the second installment of the 15 Layers trilogy, Vidalia doesn't know if she can continue working for her controlling boss, so she tried to quit. But of course it won't be that simple to escape him and the incredible sex she has with him. This story is part of a parody BDSM erotic trilogy and is not intended for anyone under the age of 18.
15 Layers of d'Onion
Series: 15 Layers, Book 1. Price: Free! Words: 12,180. Language: English. Published: September 14, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM, Fiction » Erotica » Comedy/Humor
Vidalia meets handsome, sexy and rich Artemis d'Onion, and he offers her a job as his personal assistant. But this isn't the typical job, and her duties are a bit more than she thinks she can handle. To make matters worse, she falls in love with him, but can she handle his many sexual hangups? This is the first installment in a parody BDSM trilogy,. Not recommended for those under the age of 18
Kinky Kitty
Series: Kinky Kitty. Price: Free! Words: 2,190. Language: English. Published: September 10, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » BDSM
(4.00 from 1 review)
Kitty likes kinky sex but her boyfriend doesn't. Will she have the courage to tell him she needs more in the bedroom? What's a girl to do? Short erotic story involves soft BDSM and is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. The full version of Kinky Kitty Kept is now available.
Ten Things Worse Than Rape
Price: Free! Words: 2,060. Language: English. Published: September 10, 2013 by Blush Erotica. Categories: Fiction » Poetry » Female authors, Fiction » Horror » Weird fiction
(4.50 from 4 reviews)
This short poem is dedicated to all the women I've encountered in my life who insist that being raped is the worst thing that could possibly happen to them. From someone who was date raped in her life, I can tell you...It's not! ETA updated on 9/5/17 to include twisted short story. Harsh language used. Not recommended for anyone under 18 years of age.

Series

River Runs
River awakens to a Utopian future, but nothing is as it seems. Three installments

River Runs: Book One

Price: Free!

River Runs: Book Two

Price: $0.99 USD.

River Runs: Book Three

Price: $0.99 USD.
Rose and the Prince
Rosemary catches the interest of the Crown Prince in this 3 installment series. Also includes the full censored edition.
Fallen Angel
Fallen Angel Series

Fallen Angel: Book Two

Price: $0.99 USD.

Fallen Angel: Book Three

Price: $0.99 USD.
Spicy
Three installment story of Meg and Jeremy.

Spicy: Book One

Price: Free!

Spicy: Book Two

Price: $0.99 USD.

Spicy: Book Three

Price: $1.49 USD.
Kinky Kitty
Kinky Kitty is the free hot teaser, and it concludes in Kinky Kitty Kept.

Kinky Kitty

Price: Free!

Kinky Kitty Kept

Price: $0.99 USD.
15 Layers
Here's my humorous take on the ridiculously popular 50 Shades of Grey books.

15 Layers of d'Onion

Price: Free!

15 Layers Deeper

Price: $0.99 USD.

15 Layers Fried

Price: $0.99 USD.

15 Layers Trilogy

Price: $1.69 USD.
Trudy
Trudy is a bad girl who gives into temptation in Trudy's Coma Patient (banned on several bookstores), and the conclusion has her patient turning the tables on her in Trudy's Former Coma Patient.

Trudy's Coma Patient

Price: Free!

Trudy's Former Coma Patient

Price: $0.99 USD.

Books

The Duplicitous Faces of Jen
Price: Free! Words: 1,840. Language: English. Published: December 24, 2013. Categories: Fiction » Erotica » Menage/Multiple Partners
Jen was a depressed author who made no secret of her submissive and gay loving lifestyle, but she gets the shock of her life when her husband wants to swing an unexpected way.

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Smashwords book reviews by Blush Erotica

  • Dark Passion on Aug. 08, 2014

    Wow! The only thing that prevented me from giving you 5 stars were all the typos. And boy, are there are a bunch. It's not good when you snicker at a typo instead of staying in the moment. Bored instead of board. Heal instead of heel. Things like that are littered throughout this short story. Clean those up, and...WOW!
  • Dark passion Nemesis on Aug. 25, 2014

    AGGHHH! You tease! How can you end it there? Would have been 5 stars otherwise...well, that and still those darn typos. But dang girl, you can write! I hope you continue this soon!
  • At His Command: Dominated by the Billionaire #1 on Jan. 03, 2015

    You definitely have my interest, and I would buy the sequel if it was the full book. But to pay that much for short sections? I don't think so. Either combine all of them for $2.99 or make them all $0.99 each. I would love to know what happens next and will check back to see if you ever lower the price.
  • Amy's Prescription (Doctor Dom Erotica) on Jan. 05, 2015

    Very promising beginning, but I stopped when you had Amy get the other gal "ready". UGH, sorry, not my cup of tea.
  • The Interview Book 1 on Jan. 16, 2015

    Wow, now I have to decide if I want to buy the rest. I'm very tempted, since I LOVE the way you write, and I really like both of these characters. Well done!!
  • Lost Expeditions on Feb. 12, 2015

    Interesting idea and well written, but you leave far too many unanswered questions. Why are the aliens so unpredictable? They keep some of the females but kill the rest? You mention that Natalie was curious how she could breed with them, and hint that she discovered the answer, but you don't reveal it. I assume this is an intro to a longer story, but you don't mention it at all. You just end it on a very bad note. Hard to know if I liked this or hated it.
  • Eldritchville on Feb. 24, 2015

    I had to read this in one sitting, even though I should be working. Any time I tried, it sucked me back in, even making me forget what I was working on. Very dangerous to read when you should be doing something else. Strangely written and hops around a lot, but it's gripping. Jarring and surprising ending. Didn't know what I expected, and it seemed a bit anticlimactic. What happened to everyone else? Was it all just a dream? Again, asks a lot of questions with no real answers, but it was still entertaining. If this was a movie, I would certainly watch it.
  • The Brutal Brothers, Brutal Brothers Afternoon: Part 1 (Bestiality, rape, golden showers, breeding) on April 15, 2015

    I almost didn't write a review but had to come back and let you know what I thought of this. I don't really like reading men beating up on women or any of the other distasteful things they do to that girl, but that's not why I'm rating this so low. The story is well written and interesting. I'm sure it will appeal to those disturbed people who get off on this type of stuff. I was never tempted to stop reading, even during all the unpleasantness. I didn't even have a real problem with anything other than how you chose to end it. It wouldn't matter what they recorded or how they manipulated what was done to her, since that tampering could easily be proven. But they didn't have time to do all that. I put myself in that girl's place and no amount of threats would have stopped me from going to the police, AFTER I went to the hospital and let them take all the samples they wanted on the one condition they give me a D&C to scrape out all that crap they put inside her. I would see them rot in jail before raising their bastard and eventually committing suicide from keeping that torture to myself. I would probably buy a gun and hunt them down myself. Horrible ending to a horrible situation. They should get what's coming to them.
  • Dark passion Nemesis on May 14, 2015
    (no rating)
    I'm trying to be patient! Where is the next one?? :)
  • Bought by the Trillionaire: An Alpha Trillionaire Romance on June 08, 2015

    Not sure about the possible relationship between the two. He's a shit. Even that awful Christian Grey was gentle with Ana for her first time. This guy is an ass, and he knows it. Not much of a hero, even if we're supposed to believe that he turned her on. I doubt I would pay to read more.
  • Sergeant at Arms on June 10, 2015

    I really wanted to like this. Even came back a second time to try to get through it. Poorly written. Too much telling and not enough showing. It reads like YA even with the sex, very juvenile. Couldn't make myself finish it. Sorry.
  • The Executive Book One on July 13, 2015

    I guess it had to happen. I would eventually get to one of your stories that I can't finish. But I somehow doubt you actually wrote this one, since it is no where near your normal level of writing or heat. And I snickered over the following line: "His hands were giving off this warmth, as if they were lit from within." Enough said.
  • Degrading the Future on July 22, 2015

    I'll have to agree with Ernest here. You just end it like that? But I do see you continue it with another 1000 words for 99 cents each...several times? Really? Wow!
  • The Dog Across Town on Feb. 25, 2017

    Much better! You should stick with bestiality. No one gets hurt that way. You write well, and it's refreshing not to read about women being sadistically abused. Wicked is a much better term.