I really wanted to give this book four stars but the way that chapters on past and current events are interlaced really annoyed me. I can see why its constructed like this and even accepted it during the first half of the book. However as the (present time) action picked up I started to get more and more frustrated at been taken back into the past.
On a more positive note, the major characters are believable and have a good back story. Also I can even sympathise with Kevin's frustration with some of the minor characters having meet similar people in real life.
All in all I would recommend this book.
I had previously read the first chapter when it was publish as a stand-alone book. So for some reason I have been reluctant to start the complete book and it has been on my to-read pile for nearly a year. Once i finally got around to reading it, i was surprised to find that things took an unexpected turn after the first chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
The book is well written, the plot whizzes along and the protagonist is refreshingly believable.
I am now looking forward to the second book.
This book is written from the viewpoint of the two main characters. With the two viewpoints been interlaced. Now I am not usually a fan of this technique but somehow Odette Bell managed to pull it off as I thoroughly enjoyed this book. In fact I have already purchased book 2; which is amazing in its self, given the size of my to-read pile.
I did enjoy this book and I am trying to give constructive criticism. So please take this in the spirit that it intended.
First the good points: XIN has an interesting plot, which moves along nicely. I also like the idea of a sentinel AI as the main character.
Now the bad: the fist paragraph is abysmal. In fact its so bad that I almost gave up on the book right there. Fortunately I keep going and things got better. As Frank Aaker mentioned in his review some of the writing is very stilted but it does seem to get better the further into the book one reads. As far as character go,I really liked XIN who seems more human that his human friend Dave; who is very one dimensional.
Lastly, I really didn't like the ending.
I would have given this book five stars, except for the way the viewpoint keep switching around. Something that I am personally not keen on, especially when it includes the antagonists. However this book managed to do this well enough not to spoil my enjoyment.
As this is the first book I have read in the "In Her Name" series, I had no pre-conceived ideas about the universe and was able to enjoy the book for itself. I particularly like aliens who had their won motivation and are not just humans in costumes.
Intriguing and well written short story which I really enjoyed. For such a short story the plot took a surprising number of twists and turns, all logic. Although the end was predicable. That said the characters where well fleshed out and their actions plausible.
All I can say is wow. A well written and well edited book, which has an original theme and a plot that zips along without overwhelming the reader.
For a young adult book it is very readable by, shall we say, more mature readers.
Not quite sure what to make of this book. i was quite enjoying it until about 3/4 of the way through when it suddenly became quite hard going. Not sure if this is because the book is too long, the fights get repetitive or whether it was just the fact that real-life intruded and I ended up picking it only to have to put it down almost immediately.
Never the less, I suggest that read it yourself and make your own mind up.
The Beholder (Paranormal Fantasy, Book 1)
on June 21, 2013
Not quite sure what it was about this book. It is well written and the plot is well paced. Its just that the story didn't quite gel with me. Judging by the previous reviews other people liked it a lot, so I guess its just personal preference
Only read this book if you like a novel that will keep you sitting on the edge of your seat all the way through. The tension starts on the first page and doesn't let up until the last.
This book is well written and well edited.
This is a different kind of, save the world, fantasy. As opposed to the sword and sorcery kind. Rather than spells of mass destruction, the magic is actually fairly innocuous. Rather that Conan'esque heros, the characters are normal people who are determined to stop a war that is leading their country into barbarism. Never-the-less, the story is interesting and the characters believable.
This is a typical sword and sorcery story. However, it is very well written and the world building is out of this world. Also, the plot and characters are strong.
Finally, the story is written as one long flash-back although I was unable to decide why it is structured this why, I suspect this will be relieved in a later book. However don't let this put you off reading the book. Outside of the prologue and epilogue, the story is all in the same "8 years ago" time frame.
Finally got round to reading this and it was every bit as good as the first. As it was a while since I read the first, I had sort of forgotten the details but the author did a good job of bring me back up to speed without being obvious about it.
The second book ends on a cliff hanger, so I have already bought book 3.
This is one of those books that I wish would finish but don't want to abandon. The problem was that I wasn't sure why I felt that way. The English flowed and the plot ticked along nicely. OK the characters were a little two dimensional but the author did work at giving the major characters back-stories.
As I got towards the end of the book I realise that the problem I was having was the English seemed to be aimed at Young Adults rather than Adults (This was confirmed by running readability tests on it and getting between 6th and 8th Grade).
Therefore, while I would recommend this book as a Young Adults story, it just didn't quite gel for me.
I have mixed thoughts on this book and although I enjoyed it, I was glad when I finished it. On the plus side, it was well written and the the author has a lot of good ideas. The characters were well flashed out and believable.
On the other hand it was to busy. There are six different character Point-of-Views and shortly after the start each on of these was in continuous, different, action. Which never stopped to allow the readers to catch their breath. Things calmed down later and some of the characters even managed to meet up but we still ended up switching viewpoints every chapter. The result of all this was that by the end of the book I was left feeling like I had just run a marathon.
This book was on my to-read list for a couple of months as I thought it was just another fantasy novel; was I wrong. The book is set in a non-magical world, reminiscent of medieval Europe. The story tells the story of two teenage girls trying to survive in a hostile court.
Told in the first person past perfect, the story grabbed me on the first page and kept me enthralled until the last.
For the first half of the book I didn't think that this was as good as the previous two. Then things started to take off and things started to get better and better. In the end this book is at least as good as the previous two.
I especially liked that you can't always tell reality from dreams and a couple of times I guest wrong.
Oh bother. Another 5* Odette Bell series. Ms Bell is rapidly becoming my favourite Smashword author.
This one involves a normal computer programmer who manages to get herself entangled with a top-secret, fighting demons organisation. Oh and develops a crush for the team leader. The two main characters are well formed and believable and the plot zips along nicely.
The more books I read by Odette C. Bell the harder it is to write a review. So far, all her books that I have read are excellent and this one is no exception. As is typical, it is the 1st person narrative of the main protagonist. In this case the book charts her path from a fast-food waitress to being the reluctant heroine, who has to save the galaxy.
The only niggle I have is that the book finishes in the middle. Still the author has to eat and as this book is free, one can't really complain.
An excellent steampunk adventure. Wendy Darling, of Peter Pan fame, and Dorian Gray hunt Nicola Tesla in a alternative America. I liked the world, although I definitely would not want to live in it. I also liked the way the author slowly shows us her world as her characters travel through it. Likewise, the characters are gradually fleshed out as the story progresses.
A Dream of Death (Detective Lincoln Munroe, Book 1)
on Feb. 12, 2014
This book started off as a good, but not exceptional, police procedure mystery. However, about a third of the way through it started to morph into a psychological come tangled relationship novel. I don't really like the latter plus I didn't like the, first person, protagonist. This meant that I ended up forcing myself to finish this book.
That said the book itself was well written and the characters believable so if you like this sort of book its well worth a read.
I am not sure why I didn't like this book. The world and its history are novel and interesting; the main characters are likeable and you want to know what happens to them: the writing and editing are good. So, why did I just want to finish this book?
An innovative story, set in the fairy tail realm about what happened to characters after their legend (read fairy tail) has finished. Hint, they didn't live happily ever after.
I liked this book and hope the story continues with the same characters.