This is my first book by John MycIntrye. It makes me want to read more of his writings.
The layout of the story was something that is not always seen. With it being told a character in the book it has a totally different feel than most books.
It captures you from the start. You want the story to go on forever. When you come to the end you crave more pages to read and more words so excellently written.
Great book to pick up to give you a taste of MycIntrye's books. Very glad I did. Would recommend this book to my family and friends without a second thought.
Nice little short story
Age play story (keep in mind while reading)
Not a story for those who are uncomfortable with age play and other kinks
Mild erotica/Mild BDSM
Erotica could have been more descriptive since it is labeled as an erotic story
You feel like you came in somewhere in the middle of a story.
A more in-depth beginning and ending would make it more enjoyable
More description of the characters and their relationship would have helped the reader to get to know them better
Would be wonderful if the story was longer
Ending could have been a tad better. I think erotica should have a clear, to the point ending, even if more stories based off these characters
With the way the story ended it does leave it open for a possible longer stories based on the characters relationship
A small taste of the author's style of writing
All kids imagine unicorns and wonder where they come from
Innocence in children is very much a part of the story
A very short story but a very complete story
A fantasy tale that you will enjoy
Not a story to read to your child, it is for adults
A happy yet sad story
Enjoyed seeing into the child's mind
Her daily life could have been a little shorter with more details into the unicorn given
Pick this story up. A free story.