Carter Thomas


I am an aspiring writer who hopes to get his start on Smashwords. I like to write fiction.


Cheater, Cheater
Price: Free! Words: 3,190. Language: English. Published: June 11, 2011. Categories: Fiction » Thriller & suspense » General
When Liam wakes up from an odd dream that portrays his death, he is terrified to find that his life is replaying the events of the dream. Although he is able to cheat his own death once, that doesn't mean that he can keep on doing it...

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Smashwords book reviews by Carter Thomas

  • Is There Any Way Out? on June 11, 2011

    I really wanted to love this. But I don't think that five pages is nearly enough to develop the characters as much as the author attempted to. This short story could have easily stretched over thirty pages with good writing. Instead, it's short and none of the characters are very 3-dimensional at all. I don't think that there should be such a HUGE change in such a short story. Sorry, I like the idea, but not the execution.