There are quite a few typo's in this story and grammatical mistakes. Seems more like a first draft for a much larger journey. The cover reminded me of 'The Favour Men.'
There's even mistakes in the eBook description, and tells the entire story of what happens.
I liked the authors writing style very much. A good plot with likable characters and crisp dialogue. Reading this was a treat, almost played out like watching a movie. Great short, going to look for more!
It's my first day signed up on smashwords and I feel great that I found these books! The first one Initiation was a good introduction, and then this one just took it deeper. The characters are fleshed out and interesting, the story telling is constantly moving forward and the over all tone got more serious, with still enough laughs in between. Nice one!