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Member Since:
June 15, 2011
crispynurse
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Smashwords book reviews by crispynurse
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Pieces
on July 26, 2012
Wow!!! I hope the author keeps going with this story. There is alot of potential here!!! Looking forward to more!!
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Fighting to Find Yourself
on July 31, 2012
I read Pieces and this seems to be an extension of it Wow, what a great story. It made me cry in the beginning (and I am not a crier). It did seem to start to drag about 2/3rds of the way through. Proifreading needs to be done, especially considering the amount of money the author is requesting. There were alot of pronouns that were turned around. The story also seemed to take quick turns without warning and required frequent paragraph rereads. Otherwise this author has great potential. If no one will be proofreading your books, then please consider lowering your price.