Smashwords book reviews by Kurt

  • The Trial, Tales of the Device on Feb. 03, 2012

    It was an interesting concept and fairly well written but it was predictable and it definitely lacked the kind of eroticism I look for when I buy this kind of book.
  • Absolute Ecstasy on Feb. 21, 2012

    Well writen and very sexy read.
  • Addicted to Grace on Feb. 21, 2012

    This is an exciting and imaginative storey with enough twists and turns to keep you guessing and a large helping of humor. That said it still manages to be very erotic.
  • Bimbo Maker on Feb. 21, 2012

    A good idea but it reads like a script for a cartoon with a target audience e of horny 12 year old buys.
  • Bimbo Maker 2 on Feb. 21, 2012

    A good idea but it reads like a script for a cartoon with a target audience e of horny 12 year old buys.
  • Fuck! That Demon Stole My Dick! on May 21, 2012

    Ok but too short
  • Magical Breast Growth (Breast Expansion - A Doctor Alto's Story) on May 25, 2012

    Good story. Very hot, but a bit short for the money.
  • Gender Swap Lollipop on Dec. 02, 2012

    A nice twist on the transformed by a drug story and presented with a good setup but ultimately never developed to it’s full potential. She was given 14 lollipops but the story ends after she has 2 and he accepts the transformation to quickly. Could have been much better.
  • Blackmail Sex on Jan. 22, 2013

    A very hot and well written story. A bit short but priced to make it worth reading anyway. I am looking forward to the next installment.
  • Blackmail Sex Part 2 on Jan. 22, 2013

    The story turns a bit darker but is still a great follow-up. I hope we see more of Ashley enjoying her degradation in spite of herself and not a decent into Jon brutally abusing her just because he can.
  • Enslavement Ring on Feb. 18, 2013

    It seems like it could be a good story but it is almost impossible to read due to numerous misspellings, typos, and mangled sentences. As an example for several paragraphs approximately 13% into the book “Malcolm” one of the main characters became “welcome”. Hopefully this will get cleaned up and republished, but till then stay away.
  • Programming Lucy on July 31, 2013

    I must agree with the other reviewer as far as the spelling and sentence structure are concerned. This needs an editor so badly and it’s such a shame too, because the story has some real potential. The readability deserves 1 star but the story is a 3 or 4 when you can fallow it, so I will give it 2 overall. I hope the author reads this and edits the story.
  • Ginger's Training on April 10, 2014

    Very well done. Follow Ginger as she learns to accept her place a slave and a slut, ready to be used at any time.
  • Rebound on Aug. 06, 2014

    This ended up going in a slightly different direction than I expected (more of an accidental tumble down the rabbit hole where I was expecting more retaliation back and forth) but that said I liked it. It was slightly humorous and very sexy. Well done.
  • Costume on Aug. 06, 2014

    This book was well written and somewhat interesting but I don’t think it should be classified as erotica. It’s an interesting transformation process but after that it just ends.
  • Mom is Bound to Please on Aug. 19, 2014

    The other reviewers have summed it up nicely, but let me add that the way the moms simmering desire turns to scared reluctance and than gives way to overwhelming passion is just hot.
  • Daddy's Favorite Dress on April 02, 2015

    Wow! If you are looking for some hot erotica that gets down to business quickly this is not the story for you. This is a very well written and touching story of a family torn apart by the loss of their loving wife and mother.
  • Quality Control on May 04, 2015

    This was an original and very imaginative story. I would have enjoyed some more information regarding the changes that persisted after removing the collar and there wasn’t enough sex, but I did enjoy the story
  • Swap Sickness (Gender Swap) on May 19, 2016

    This is a very good story with a surprisingly sweet ending. Some small spelling and wording issues are the only things keeping me from giving it 5 stars.
  • The Slave Clause on May 24, 2016

    The story was ok but the spelling was terrible. It just kept getting in the way, the story would start to get hot and then I would be forced to re-read a section multiple times to figure out what the author meant or worse yet skip it. With a good editor this might be 3.5 stars, but as is the best I can do is 2. This story started without explaining anything about this magic clause in her employment contract or how her rival managed to convince the board to invoke it but then improved as they started her training. Unfortunately the story took a turn for the worse near the end as this supposedly strong woman suddenly decides after just a few days of training that she wants to belong to him.
  • Names Have Power: Tim's Magic Voice Makes A Harem on June 06, 2016

    The story was very good, flowed well and drew me in. There were a few places where an editor would have help make reading this more enjoyable but it wasn’t enough to distract from the story. My only real disappointment was that the erotic content was not as hot as I was looking for.
  • Alien Exchange Program on June 14, 2016

    I agree with ronbo2. This was a good story with a bit of humor, some good sex, and enough depth to really get to know the charters. The way the story unfolded is completely believable as long as you can accept that they were switched.