This was a good story with a nice romantic ending that just made me smile. Some good hot sex and a good story, loved it. To top it all off the author is very sexy and it is easy to imagine her in the role of the female lead.
A nice twist on the transformed by a drug story and presented with a good setup but ultimately never developed to it’s full potential. She was given 14 lollipops but the story ends after she has 2 and he accepts the transformation to quickly. Could have been much better.
The story turns a bit darker but is still a great follow-up. I hope we see more of Ashley enjoying her degradation in spite of herself and not a decent into Jon brutally abusing her just because he can.
It seems like it could be a good story but it is almost impossible to read due to numerous misspellings, typos, and mangled sentences. As an example for several paragraphs approximately 13% into the book “Malcolm” one of the main characters became “welcome”. Hopefully this will get cleaned up and republished, but till then stay away.
I must agree with the other reviewer as far as the spelling and sentence structure are concerned. This needs an editor so badly and it’s such a shame too, because the story has some real potential. The readability deserves 1 star but the story is a 3 or 4 when you can fallow it, so I will give it 2 overall. I hope the author reads this and edits the story.
This ended up going in a slightly different direction than I expected (more of an accidental tumble down the rabbit hole where I was expecting more retaliation back and forth) but that said I liked it. It was slightly humorous and very sexy. Well done.
Wow! If you are looking for some hot erotica that gets down to business quickly this is not the story for you. This is a very well written and touching story of a family torn apart by the loss of their loving wife and mother.
This was an original and very imaginative story. I would have enjoyed some more information regarding the changes that persisted after removing the collar and there wasn’t enough sex, but I did enjoy the story
The story was ok but the spelling was terrible. It just kept getting in the way, the story would start to get hot and then I would be forced to re-read a section multiple times to figure out what the author meant or worse yet skip it. With a good editor this might be 3.5 stars, but as is the best I can do is 2.
This story started without explaining anything about this magic clause in her employment contract or how her rival managed to convince the board to invoke it but then improved as they started her training. Unfortunately the story took a turn for the worse near the end as this supposedly strong woman suddenly decides after just a few days of training that she wants to belong to him.
The story was very good, flowed well and drew me in. There were a few places where an editor would have help make reading this more enjoyable but it wasn’t enough to distract from the story. My only real disappointment was that the erotic content was not as hot as I was looking for.
I agree with ronbo2. This was a good story with a bit of humor, some good sex, and enough depth to really get to know the charters. The way the story unfolded is completely believable as long as you can accept that they were switched.