The Mating (The original Law of the Lycans story)
on March 17, 2013
Great story. The characters were well developed and entertaining. A story with Two sexy alpha males...whats not to like. I'm looking forward to reading the second book. This book is wayyyy better than the ones I've actually paid a pretty decent chunk of change for. Thanks for making it available.
I wrote a raving review but, dang it, something stupid happened with my kindle and it disappeared. All I'm going to say is great story. I'm looking forward to reading book 2 and i hope that damn Marla doesn't show back up.
OMG! These stories are addictive. I read two books in series in one day and I can't seem to get enough of the Lycans and their sexy Alpha leaders. The story is action packed with some unexpected twist. I'm looking forward to reading the third installment.
I appreciate the author for sharing this story. Set aside the editing issues, there were so many inconsistencies with the storyline. Also the story was all over the place - way too many conflicts that did not belong and too many unanswered questions. Furthermore, the shift in narration was confusing - too many characters narrating the story in first person and not always clear who was speaking.
IMO, this book has the making of being a pretty decent read, it just needs a LOT of work.