Steven Huang

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  • Freaks in the City on Dec. 02, 2012

    Amazingly well written and thought up. There were some spelling mistakes in the epub, but they were small and didn't detract from the experience at all.The ending was a huge and pleasant surprise for me, haha, i didn't expect it one bit. I really, really hope there will be a book three! :) The one thing that could have made this series even better would be a deeper focus on the technical side of things, or even just more content on the science and theory behind it all--it would make things a lot more interesting, more real and deep. You should maybe mention how Jay charges herself, how she replenishes her supply of chemicals for pheromones. I would also like to see Tyler converse more with Jay about her machine aspects, that would be interesting.