Excellent erotica. Good dialogue and well detailed scenes. The plot has a slight weakness. Looks like smashwords is missing parts so I'll wait for the omnibus edition.
on March 23, 2014
Well written erotica. Housewife heroine is tempted into teasing a man. This spirals out of control with Amanda then coming under the control of a man she despises. This leads into a series of adventures which she shamefully enjoys. Some of the scenes are quite novel...and hot.
Sex seems to be confined mainly to the upper part of the heroine's anatomy. You have to read to see what I mean.
usual Argus fare (which is a compliment) let down by an uneventful conclusion. I have purchased a number of his books over the years with the majority having a more satisfactory ending than this story.
Typical of Ms.Thorn's work. Well written, detailed erotica. Suffers though of being written from the first person perspective with the story having to be cut into sections to cover what the characters feel. Better if it was written in the 3rd person.