Originally from Upstate NY, Emily McDaid began a career in technology PR in Boston and then unexpectedly found love across the Atlantic. Now married, with two children, and a dual UK and US resident, the transatlantic experience has formed the foundation for her writing. She currently lives in Boston with her family. In addition to writing, she owns a small PR business, and her hobbies include yoga, running and pretending to be a dinosaur.
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- Clotho's Loom
on Jan. 27, 2013
Originally posted as a review on my blog, titled, A Rich Tapestry Woven by Clotho's Loom, found here: http://www.emilymcdaid.com/blog/2012/12/3/a-rich-tapestry-woven-by-clothos-loom.html.
My rating: 5 stars
Based on this first offering, I'm excited for Shawn StJean's bright future as a writer of military literary fiction. I am awarding this book five stars for its excellence married with the author's future potential.
The characters of Clotho's Loom are richly imagined and the imagery extremely detailed. The storyline brings us to the heart of the modern wars we mindlessly continue. Shawn StJean's biggest strength as a writer is articulating the nuances of military culture, and he very clearly has a grasp on the English language. He has a command of so much vocabulary he could be bilingual: his second tongue being Obscurity. The result is a rewarding piece of fiction that reminds of you of the beauty, depth and breadth of our English language, which I guess is one of the points of literary fiction, and Shawn StJean has nailed it. I enjoyed this novel especially because female and male characters are deeply realistic: easy to picture; people that you feel you know.
My main complaint with the book was something that was perhaps triggered by the author's command of the language: a simple character name. The lead female name, Nexus, to me, sounded incongruous with her age and position and kept reminding me of a science fiction novel. It would be interesting to learn why the author chose such an unconventional name for her. Perhaps with later works naming can be conquered more deftly. But that minor complaint is far outshadowed by the author's command of vocabulary, the interesting storyline and the well-thought plot. The nugget of imagination that the premise relies upon (a veteran being drafted because of his experience, rather than in spite of his experience) I found deeply realistic in light of today's counterinsurgency warfare, and as such, it was easy for me to suspend my disbelief and get into the character's head. For this reason, for me, Clotho's Loom was very much a story worth telling.
Make no mistake, this is one long book, but it was worth it for me. I was really impressed by how clearly Shawn St. Jean had every detail of this story mentally imagined. He accounted for every minute of his characters' lives. And I felt he did a tremendous job translating his mental imagery to the page, the result of which is a novel one can really sink their teeth into and expand their horizons on the topics of personal relationships, the intricate bond between governments and the men and women who fight to defend them, war itself, and especially, the beauty of language and literature.